Good action. believable. I really love this one so far.

great story, please keep writing, stories like this are the reason I love fanfiction.

This was a terrific read. I've been a fan of Lora's Breed series since the beginning and I can tell you that this was more interesting than any she has turned out in the last four years. Jondy is strong without being a "Mary Sue". She's smart, athletic, loyal - all the things that make for a compelling lead character. If you were to take out the Breed element, rewrite the story with new associates, you would have a book deal in no time. My husband, John Arkwright, is a sci-fi author and has placed in the top five for Writers of the Future three years running. As much as I love his work, *this* story has me wanting more! Please email me when you get the next installment ready, I can't wait to find out what happens. - Julia D. Scott ()

Please update this is amazing!

Please update soon

Oh, what a fantastic idea for a crossover!

And great start too.