That... kind of sucked.

Very nice, very nice indeed.

WHOA!
My only comment to having read the whole story.

Like someone previously commented, your timelines and weaponry knowledge is quite a bit off.

Other then that, excellent story.

Bro, you REALLY need to go over firearms in depth and revise most of your stuff, Mk. 19’s(what would be mounted on a Humvee) are grenade launchers, light anti-vehicle at the most, they do not have AP rounds, Russian MGs would be chambered in 7.62x54R, NOT 7.62x39mm(what the AK-47 would use), Hotel Moscow would probably be using AK-74’s(chambered in 5.45x39mm), if you wanna designate between Russian .50s and American .50s, the US uses 12.7x99mm, Russia uses 12.7x108mm. Hotel Moscow would probably be using T-55, T-64, T-70 MAYBE T-80 tanks bought from one of the MANY countries that use them or surpluses them out, NOT 10 year old State of The Art Tanks...not to mention the fact that the admiring on an armored SUV would most definitely stand up to even AP 5.56x45mm, AP 7.62x51NATO(.308 Winchester) could possibly do the job, and seeing as how the SCAR-H uses just such a round, it’d make more sense than an M4, the Special Forces community normally uses the H&K 416, the Mk. 16 SCAR(5.56) or the Mk. 17 SCAR(7.62x51NATO)...

Beautiful story. I love it.

I hope the Punisher kills Revy, she's nothing but a misery tourist who uses her shitty past as an excuse for her actions.

I am... disappointed to this story really it could have been great but...you don't follow the personality of the Punisher and that you seriously favor some of the characters.. I had expectation for this really it was awesome when I first read it but now not any more.

Gonna stop here. You have failed as a writer. The Punisher would not have stopped here and you probably know this. Do not let characters live just because you like them.

Excelente historia hermano, y con ese final, puedo imaginar fácilmente a un viejo canadiense queriendo salvar a esa ciudad a la que irán.

Dude you paint a beautifully badass story man I not a fan of the punisher or Black Lagoon but the way you write is making me one. You capture the spirit of both the comic and manga SOOO well! The violence the action of the characters the ambiguous ending of the story I fucking loved it all MAN!Keep up the good work!

Oh man, this is really nice. Hope there's a sequel

Very interesting. Don't know how I really feel about this story, I kind of like it, yet not. I highly doubt Roanapur would've gone down that fast, regardless of the Punisher. I will say Fury's involvement was rather overkill though. As far as Eda's story, mixed about that too. Kinda mad at her setting those soldiers up, but I'm pissed to high hell that those scumbags murdered some guy in South America for pure political reasons. I do share Fury's sentiments about the CIA, fuck em. Traitorous bastards.

Really enjoyed your story! I read from beginning to end and never felt like you were being too wordy or non-descriptive. The believaebility of the dialogue, not to mention Rock's own actions throughout really sealed the deal. This is one of the best fics on next to broken birds fly to Roanapur.

I liked how you handled the final few chapters, with Hotel Moscow's end seeming bitter sweet. You never portrayed the characters as cardboard cut out villains. Revy also came off believable in how she felt about Rock's actions to protect her and Dutch.

Bravo and hope you continue writing fanfiction.

Beautiful story, I couldn't stop reading :D hope to hear more fanfics in the black lagoon department

I love the story so far, it's really beautifully written, but try to make revys profanities more clever rather than "what the f*ck is f*cking wrong with you f*cking f*ckhead?!" try something like "what the f*ck is your problem a*shole?!"