OH, HELL YES! No pun intended because of the title. XD But damn, that was beautiful and ended so HOT!

Simply breathtaking. Yugi dancing for Atem and them falling in love with each other through dancing and lovemaking

TuT this is so beautiful TuT

awwwww! that was so cute and so dam sexy hot I loved it :3

So...hot..sex sence..! * Leaves the usual note of gone mrs. chono hunting *( in another part of the house )
Yugi: ooohh...yami! Not right now we have geusts! * yugi is under yami and yami smoothering his neck and lips in kisses *
Yami: they can wait aibou...ooohhh please aibou i need u! * Yami moaned against yugi's neck *
Yugi:ooohhhh!...OH OKAY! but only because u got me worked up! * ends up taking his pants off and revierws run *

REALLY GOOD

OMG I think I need a bottle of water after reading this story.

This story was very entertaining keep up the good work Natoya-san :)

KYAAAAAA!HOTTTT! OMR! this was so good and a Ancient Egyptian setting too I LOVE IT TOO! Yugi will make a good dancer though he will make a better wife and queen for Atem(hehehe wish the canon series wre like that XD) again please don't get tired in giving us these amazing one-shot fics and multi-chapter stories is also always welcome _

I can see Yugi being a belly-dancer and he make a perfect Birthday present to Atemu

oh gud it was really good, ireally hope you could make another one of this, i would gladly read it

AWWWWWWWWWW! That was beyond adoreable! I adored this!

I 3 this story!

I like it! **

Wow I'd forgotten how hot this story is! :)