I'm so in love with this... oh my god my whole life was going to be all wasted if I haven't readed this asdfgHKJLZBXBYPW!
perfectly, flawlessly written! i love these two like a crazy ugh just look at my face when I readed this.. *cries but ends up laughing hysterically* thank you for writing this! :D

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would prolly be sexier if you included some dialogue or names XD

Too cheesy for a KLaw in my opinion, but definitely well written. Very eloquent and well-chosen wording and certainly well described, nice metaphors aswell. Would like to read more of you, I can't believe I didn't notice this fanfic about one of my OTPs before. And nice add about Oda ;P who knows, maybe he's really 'round here. (lol, yeah right...)

wow that was beautifully written. i'm in awe! and by the way, i love the disclaimer XD

This may not be your usual style, but I still think this is absolutely marvellous!

There are very few KiddxLaw fanfictions on this site, and this is amongst the best, in my humble opinion.

Your attention to detail and intense description of every single moment meant I could have been there watching them...what's not to like? :')

Haha, the image of Oda reading this...Very descriptive, I felt like the creeper pervert sitting in the boat with them. Seriously, it was just that good. *grins*

Hm, KiddxLaw isn't my favorite, but must say yet again that I love your attention to detail, I may as well have been the creeper in the boat with them XD

Exceptional job, please keep writing!

Cute. I love KiddxLaw, but there really isn't enough. Thanks for adding such a unique entry to the pairing's fandom, this is one of my favorites.

Good afternoon my lovely pair of Candies!

Well I put this on my "To Do" list (and still ended up a day late!) So...here be my review:

You said this isn't your usual style, yet it's written well - it seems like you are comfortable with this style and that makes it easy to read. I LOVED the level of description, I could see everything clearly, I could even vividly imagine the sounds, the soft starlight on pale and tanned skin, the sound of hands running through hair... I ADORE fics that are this descriptive because, as you know, I have a rather vivid imagination which needs it's doodle-fuel.

I think you both deserve some congratulations~

I thoroughly enjoyed this! Thank you for brightening my day with your writing.

*Hugs for the duo!*

What about the Yuri an hentai? Maybe Oda reads those two! xD

It's amazing writing, an of course (dare I say?) sexy~ x3 lol

It's always fun to try a new writing style :D