Awesome! Is there going to be another chapter? If there is please upload as soon as possible!

Hi, I'm retarded & can't figure out how to respond to peoples reviews so consider this both a review & a response to your review. First of all, I really like the story & look forward to reading more :)& I was wondering, (also because I'm a retard & probably missed something) who killed Edward? & why did they want to? Judging by the timezone it would mean he was only fourteen (but that's also just me 'cause I like to think that his birthday is in February). Second of all, thank you for your review, I know I haven't corrected most of the stuff yet but but I changed the "right" to "write" also I wrote most of my story out of personal preference & how I thought it was supposed to look, :/ I've never written a story before & needed some guidance so I greatly appreciate it! -

Ed died! TT NNNNNOOOOOO~

YOU EVIL EVIL PERSON! I am mad at you now Elaina, you made Ed die in painful sounding ways, and Ed dosen't like reading about himself dying! Do you ed? [Ed] No, no not really, and btw, i probably would say that... did clone Me tell you that?

that was well detailed and sad

in a good way of course :)

That was SO sad. I really don't like death fictions, but yours is an exception. They were in character at all times, but it sent butterflies to my stomach. I just wanted to kill that man. But I couldn't. You made my feelings emerge. GREAT Fanfiction.