Very well written.

Oh so funny! You had me laughing from the start! I loved it. Very nice :)

Best,

Caelhir

Very entertaining :D

I imagine Eomer would be in for even more embarrassment after that exit! Heh, I love Legolas' playful side. And the imagery of Gimli being "hung like a horse" is something that will stay with me for the rest of my life, I'm sure, hah! XD

I just love the sassy elf ...

It's sloppy around the edges, for certes-as you warned us, unbeta'd. But some of the spelling errors are very distracting and could use a good going-over just for peace of mind.

Eomer seems very earthy at the beginning in his thoughts, but his speech suggests more education-so there's a bit of an inconsistency there. And, of course, there's really no laying of groundwork for his sudden attraction to Gimli-if attraction you could call it, but it was something light and fun for all that.

Legolas' remark about Gimli having been "service enough" made me laugh.

Can't wait for the next chapter of Sons.

Marchwriter

That was quite a surprise. Your Eomer was very earthy at the beginning. Looks like everyone had a good time. And you left it so that we were wondering did what we think happened really happen? Its nice to see Legolas with a smile for a change. And the mussed look suits him.

I suggest you change the rating to T just to be safe.

I did a spit-take I giggled so hard...

My only repsoce when I saw "This is not what it looks like" was "oh shut up! Of COURSE it was!"

Fun times were had.

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