Reviews for What is Wrong Here?
Rhiannamator chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
Miz is so devious & manipulative. He's got quite the sadistic streak going, and he's feeling a little vengeful & perhaps... a little hurt? He wanted to give everything to Edge, hm? They would be quite the power couple, wouldn't they? Of course, i don't blame for wanting to Keep precious Adam all for himself. Esp after he's had a taste of the Sex Kitten.

Speaking of Sex Kittens... oh look, Adam's dick is throbbing. xD 'Hey, Baby. So? I was thinking of your fingers in my ass on the drive over here, bend me over and make me scream.' That would work! But no, i def understand why he would want to bring a Miz-boner to Jay. Be like bringing a prostitute into your house to make dinner for your family. Dirty & wrong.

But ir brings about Adam self lovins... my fave kind of self-lovins. Even tho this is a little more like self-abuse, lol. It's okay, Adam. Mike does the same thing to me.

Oh good lawd this memory. It just kills me dead. Adam on his hands & knees... *drools* getting played with... toys... begging... *swoons* and then the threat of cuffs... *thuds* Oh, i know he feels so shameful about it, but for such a tiny scene it was scorching. Hell, for any size scene it was scorching.

Hey, it's always good to carry an emergency bag. Esp when you travel.

"Once Adam was satisfied," in more ways than one. :P

No, Miz wouldn't let on to Jay. He wants to keep his little secret as much as Adam does. How else could the devious little shit benefit from fucking with him? Sure, Mike could tell Jay, but that wouldn't get his dick wet.

I did wonder why Adam never just told Jay about Mike. But once again, you have completely logical reasons. If Jay broke up w/ him over a kissing another dude, he might not be too happy with a fling. However, Adam being scared & needing attention is also perfectly reasonable, esp if he was craving passion. There's just no good solution... which is why this is such a fantastic piece.

*giggle* Aww, my poor cougar. I dunno why comparing Adam to a prowling older woman is so hilarious to me, but there ya go. And no, i don't think he's old... but i do like teasing him about it. xP

Oh, Adam. Poor sweet doll. Feeling so dirty. Seeing Jay just brought it all home, how much he could lose. ...and since? Since what, Adam?

Still, the two of them playing around together was so cute and made me d'aww. & it showed so well how loving & comfortable they are together. The dryer made me giggle.

Oh yes, Jay. That is a suberbly fine ass. But i understand why Adam wouldn't want to give it up right now. All he'd think about was Mike, & betrayal...

Awwwwwwwww, do ya hafta put on clothes? *pouts w/ Jay*

And gawd, everything really would be perfect... except...

Oh. That's what 'since' is. That's just heartbreaking, thinking of Adam being an actual whore, esp at a young age. No wonder he needs love & real affection so much. & why being a whore for Mike, sex in return for his silence, is hitting him so damn hard. Not hat i wouldn't anyway, but jeebus, woman. You just added more layers of motivation, emotion, so much depth to this story. Does Jay know about this? That's what's really plaguing me. If he did know, would it make him more forgiving of what Adam is going thru now? Dammit, i love this story so much.

Nasty coffee is the worst. But i'm with Adam, i'll drink it anyway.

Uh oh. Don't answer that phone! *cringes*

Dammit, why does he have to talk so hot & dirty... *shivers*

And Adam relies on his supreme acting ability... but Jay has known him too long. He doesn't believe him for a second. Oh, this is not looking good.

iwannaseethattape iwannaseethattape iwannaseethattape

OMG i can't wait until you continue with this. There's so much going on with everyone. It's complex and hot and nail-ruining all in one. I honestly have no clue where this could go and it's driving me nuts. Love this & you so very much!
BellaHickenbottom chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
Even though mike/Adam works I don't want it to ruin Adam/jay! They are just made for each other!
Rhiannamator chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I don't even know how to review this story. I just love it to pieces. How do you always do this to me? First Forbidden, then Psychos, Sucker, Twincest... all stories that send me a-flutter the second i open the page to re-read them. And now this. This one takes my breath away. I guess i'll just jump straight into it.

I love the "slightly non-consensual." *giggle* Perhaps under duress? On the record as having been protested against? I love it when they struggle, hehe.

I just wanna say that i can so clearly see everything Miz is doing. Every expression, every gesture. I can hear his voice. Maybe it's partly b/c i'm on a Miz high, but i think it has a lot to do with how you've written him. You've so nailed his arrogant, domineering persona. Like i said on twitter, it's like you plucked him off the screen and put him in Adam's mouth. And i'm loving every bit of it. You know i love it when Miz uses our Adam.

Smurfette. I ADORE that he calls him Smurfette. OMG. & it makes so much sense that he'd be in there screaming after the high he just had. Adam is def there at the wrong time. Miz is a bad, bad man. Show me where the bad man touched you, Adam. *smirks*

Of course he'd only assault him when Christian wasn't there. Edge is not the only opportunist in the WWE.

"One step closer in cementing that he wasn't a joke to the world, he wasn't a joke of a champ and he should definitely be considered, in his mind and to Adam, man enough." I love this. Miz clawing his way to the top has become one of my favourite stories in the world of wrestling.

Poor Adam wishing he could melt through the lockers to escape. It's such a relatable image. I know i've wished similar things on occasion.

No, neither one are innocent. There you go again, making the characters all human and stuff. And yep, that's what the best bad men do. Magnify the ugliness of the simple truth, confirm fears. Beautiful.

*purrs* Mhmm. I like when Adam flinches & blushes, too. Damn you, woman. You have this way of bringing out my evil streak and making me delight in a character's pain & angst. Well, i may not be an angels, but i'm having fun, lol.

"I know how you look on your knees with a cock down your throat, begging for more when your hair is pulled. I know how you feel." *shivers* Guh. He certainly has a way with words. I want to know all these things, too. & the use of the word "intimate" was perfect. It shows how far under Adam's skin he can really get. Those images never leave me, either, Miz. ;)

The way he has him by the throat and touching his belly does bad things to me.

OOH! Low blow, Miz! DAMN. And it made Adam shake off the little spell Miz was weaving over him. His dirty talk was making me feel things i shouldn't either, lol. & now they get all growly at each other. Fucking hot hot images. Yes, Adam we all know you want it. Maybe not enough to cheat on Jay, but you def want it.

Aww! Can't Fight This Feeling! I love that song, and now it will forever remind me of E&C. I can totally see Jay singing obnoxiously & making Adam sing along, just to distract him. "It had meaning and Mike standing here shoving shit in his face did not." I love the contrast there, and it makes sense that a reminder of the love that he & Jay share would make him feel terrible. It's heart-wrenching, that line.

Mike has a point. It's no skin off his nose if Adam gets in trouble w/ Jay. He doesn't have anything to lose at this point, & Adam has everything to lose.

I want that video. I want it now. Miz, you can leave it w/ me & i won't post it on my twitter feed until you call for it. Promise.

Oh, Jay. I feel so bad for him, being so happy and oblivious while his beloved is being assaulted and manipulated. I would looooove to see the tag belts E&C would come up with. They would totally reek of awesomeness.

The images. The sweet images of Miz shoving his cock down Adam's throat... nails... it may be wrong, but i love it so. That lovely mouth was made to have a dick in it.

Poor Adam. He feels as if there are no options, yet still feels like a slut. I'm sure Jay would be angrier at Mike if Adam just told him... but i imagine there would be repurcussions on their relationship later. Of course, all this shit eating him up inside will affect their relationship, too. Yep, Adam is well and truly fucked.

Oh my... Adam is such a good little cockslut. *shudders* And he loves it so... "Want this dick... Smurfette?" *nod nod nod*

He doesn't need your ass now, darlin, but he will. It's a matter of time, Pretty. Yes yes, Mike is disgusting. But in a hot way, lol.

"Adam nodded again, relaxing his throat muscles and taking Mike as far as he could, whimpering around his width. Adam let his eyes flutter open and rolled them up toward Miz, giving him a sweet innocent look." *gasm* Yup, right there with ya, Mike. And as far as Adam swallowing and whether it was b/c he liked it or had no choice, i'm sayin 6 of one, half a dozen of the other. Adam loves wht Mike does to him... he just hates that it gets to him, that Mike has that power over him. That it's tearing apart what he should be having w/ Jay.

I love Mike's little smile, then covering by cracking his neck. It's very Miz. Ah, poor darling Adam. Jeff coming after you is very nerve-wracking indeed, lol.

I'm so glad this isn't a oneshot. I want MOAR! & i swear, two days before reading this i was listening to "Making Love Out of Nothing At All" and thought of E&C the whole time. So again, you invaded my brain.

I've been raving all over the place about your Miz, but have sorely neglected the way you write Adam. He's so perfectly conflicted and beautiful. His image is so clear to me when i read it. I adore every aspect of this, and i like i said, i am claiming this story as mine. It is now solely for my entertainment. If others find joy in it, that's just a bonus. ;) All mine, just like you. *snuzzles*

Also... when i said that i loved you, meant that i'd love you foreverrrr...
takers dark lover chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
Oh great now Jay knows that something is going on. Adam would be better off if he comes clean and tells Jay, but then there wouldn't be a story.

Please hurry with an update can't wait to see what happens next!
ilzehs chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
I like my evil guys to be insanely hot. So I'm definitely finding this villain Miz hell lot sexy. & I'm still relishing this Miz/Edge goodness. I have been waiting for someone to write this pairing since their on-screen confrontation. Specially was interested to see you try them in a wholesome fic after that beautiful drabble. So far, I am having a wondrous amount of fun with this. Btw, I forgot to mention in my previous review, the name of the story amuse the shit outta me ;P

You have written Miz so fucking well...I can't stress it enough. His arrogance, evilness, sickness, & the way he's making Adam pay for hurting his ego...Its brilliant. Yes, he's having more fun in torturing Adam. Making a bitch outta him & making Adam pay for daring to turn on him. The depiction of his thought process put a clear cut light on the situation. Miz is basically teaching Adam a lesson that he's not the one to fuck around with. & how everyone is suppose to take him seriously. & Adam...the little angsty slut...poor doll is always getting in troubles.

I'm loving the characterization to pieces here. This is one of the most interesting Adam too I have read in a long long time. You make it so easy for me to enjoy him..feel him. Your without a doubt best at writing Edge slash. Your Adam has grown through so many shades & this one is definitely one of my top favs. He's insecure, angsty & his past plays a part. You didn't make him a vulnerable innocent bitch straight away like people do with their bottoms...You have given him such a well-worked character here. There is a past of his that explains so many things.

Gawd...This 1st particular part...I fucking loved it. Miz is having such fun torturing beautiful Adam. & he's like not basically a bad guy...His ego just got hurt. He's not letting someone take him as a joke. Adam did, & he's making sure he pays. *Giggles* Him treating Adam like a whore cuz he asked for it...dammit this Miz is AWESOME!

Adam is written so differently here. I am so impressed with your work with this fic so far Terrah. You can feel his angst more than his pain...Cuz it seems like a part of his believe he deserves what Miz is putting him through. He's not a dismal in distress basically here. He's insecure & ashamed. & in that mindset he's letting things get even messier. & a part of me believe he like being treated as a whore.

*DROOLS* Miz playing with Adam's ass with a butt-plug...Adam being such a sexy slut...Gawd...You are so good when it comes to watering my mouth. Precious precious images just exploded my imaginations...I fucking want more Miz/Adam like this!

You have manage to make your plot unique by giving Adam a unique mindset here. He's not crying or being broken...Not that I don't like that sometimes..But i like this better. Cuz its different.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE how well-turned things have been so far. There is so much into this...Things un-said...Things said...You have made the story damn entertaining even in initial stages. This whole flashback to Adam & Jay's relationship problems... Adam's insecurities...Hehe the little Redge teaser...it was all done brilliantly.

& Miz flirting with Adam...Making his moves so bluntly..Adam being so needy & wanting attention...Seriously, I am enjoying your Adam more than ever. His recent characterization in Twincest, & now this...You already had me won, but this just keep making me love you more & more.

Its actually understandable. I am loving the theory here. How u have given Adam reasons..How you have given Miz reasons...See people? This is how you fictionalize things...Just not plain stupidity & cheesy corny shitty writing with a bad guy & a good guy with no fucking background on anything.

Hehe, Adam is a sexy cougar ;P I love this shade of his so damn much. & I love hungry young men setting their claim on Adam. Adam can be a manipulative bitch, but I like when young studs strike back to make him understand its not polite to be a teasing slut lol.

The spark died..It happens. Adam wanted to feel desired again...Like he once did when Jay & him started. I don't think Jay realized. But a babe like Adam *cough*whore*cough* needs to be reminded every once in a while how he's fucking owned ;P

Aww Jay is written so sweetly...& its kinda depressing. Poor Adam. He's in a bad spot here. & looks like doll has some past memories too...He should just tell Jay..

OMG...A slap on Adam's pretty ass...delicious lovely image right in the middle of the thick angst...Adam's predicament here is depressing me. What's he gonna do? *Giggles* Sweekcheeks...I love you Terrah *kisses* U make me wince at one moment, & next moment your making me giggle like an idiot.

I LOVED Adam & Jay's first scene here. Jay came off as total sweetheart. & this kinda explains why Adam would have felt dejected, or neglected. These flash backs put a dark light to Adam's past...He was used as a whore...He's insecure...He wanted to be used like that again..which is psychologically understandable. Christian was too sweet..Maybe Adam wanted Jay to lay his claim on him.

Oh God...Adam's past sound frightening...This story is so fucking good..

And Miz strikes again...God, his dirty talk...Fucking awesome! You know how long I have yearned & craved to read Adam like this? With characters like these? In a scenario like this? When I say your an answer to my wants, I speak my heart out.

Fuck fuck fuck...I can't get over the images of Adam riding Miz & Miz taping it all secretly...Adam, you little little lying slut...Poor Jay. But seriously, poor Adam too. & Miz, u evil sexy man, I fucking love you.

Jay's suspicious...This is gonna get so interesting. I am seriously in love with this story's every aspect.

Thank you thank you so damn much for being so damn awesome! I'm definitely looking forward to more!
ilzehs chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I feel so short of words when it comes to you, yet I usually over-run the given space for the review. The current roll you have been on, its keeping me sane. I think you know very well why. My constant frustration with fiction world is turning me off from slash big time. But you keep giving me a reason to stay hopeful. Not matter how many reviews you get, or what kind, you're a stand out. You might have lost support & ass-kissers, but you have earned so much respect as an author by showing your desire to grow & nourish. You keep getting amazing-er as amazing-er. Which astonish me to limits since your one of the best already. All I have to say is please, don't lose your spirit. Don't let the amount of reviews decide how good you are or how interested people find you. You are above that. You know how good you are, we do. So keep going. & keeping making us proud as your top supporters. You are perfect in every single aspect. You are one of the very few who have mended logical characterization with quality writing.

Onto the story now...

Rhi beat me to it. I wanted to claim this as mine, lol. So yeah, this is my new fav. & I have several reasons to explain my absolute whipped-ness by it. Lets get started, shall we?

So, FINALLY, I get Miz the way I always desired to read him. How I feel strongly connected to his character. As a hero/villain, I always believe the touch of arrogance & aggression to his character is the key factor. I have been begging for people to write Miz accordingly to his look. There is nothing girly, vulnerable, bitchy, pathetic, slutty bout him. He's so damn aggressive & cocky. & it has become such a trend to fuck up the natural personalities of characters nowadays for slashers. Just cuz u luv somebody doesn't give u a right as an author to destruct their personality. & what is it with people's obessession with breaking a manly as hell man? Its sickening...what kind of pleasure they get out of it? Randy, Miz, Ted, Christian...Why are they always written as total foreign? When I simply can't understand from where are their characters coming from? I get it its fiction, but its not a stupidity contest. Or over-the-top irrelevant fantasies. Writing fiction doesn't mean you have to write something out of this world. You know why I call you authentic out of so many people? Cuz you let me feel a connection with your characters. You let me see them in those roles. Which is hardly a case with other people. You HAVE to consider if your character's look or personality is fitting in a certain role or not. Stop destructing someone's masculinity for no fucking reason. & stop fucking up natural bottom's characterizations too. Seriously Terrah, right now your the 1% out of 3% who are doing it right in the slash world. & I'm glad your keeping the quality as high as ever.

Anyways, thank you for giving me this sexy as hell Miz. In total accordance to his look/character. & damn damn damn...I ABSOLUTELY am loving every bit of him in this fic. This is gonna end up being my fav everest Miz fic.

Secondly, ideal E&C characterization. Without a shadow of a doubt, E&C has been fucked up more than any other pairing by slashers. I am so happy I have you with me now with whom I can share my frustration regarding illogical characterization. & you thankfully show desire to right slash world's wrongs. Generally, new, old, E&C has zero believability thanks to the idiotic characterization. Your characterization is what shows your strength as a thoughtful writer. If you're not gonna concentrate on your characters & pay mind to every aspect of theirs, your gonna fuck up. & your gonna fuck up bad.

3rdly, unbaised writing of yours. That is why I trust u so much. I can defend it, I can support it & I can worship you without feeling like I'm kissing ass or being over-the-top/dis-honest or more so, a hypocrate. Mostly Jeff/Miz/Ted fans are so biased in writing their favs, they almost write them like they r not even humans. With no fucking flaws whatsoever. No one is saint. Everyone fucks up at some point. A mess is not created by a single person. Both parties play a role. This is why I call you an authentic writer. You write things I can feel, connect to, & actually don't shake my head at the stupidity of the writer. You pay equal mind & effort to all of your characters. Not just Edge, or Jeff. You never make me feel like we are being biased with Edge. You give him flaws, You let him create messes then suffer for it. & you give your bad guys reasons to be bad, unlike other hateful authors who r so far up in their fav's asses, they forget other characters deserve some work too.

I LOVE how you have created a situation in which although Miz is doing the bad things, but is actually provoked. Where he's not to blame solely. Plus, u have manage to let him stay sexy & hot. Which is what I admired the most.

Now onto Adam...This is what I have been asking for. I love how Adam is at fault here too. Seriously, you don't get some1 addicted to that ass then leave them dry & high ;P & I love the depth here in regard to your writing...How you have given hints Adam has a reason to be insecure with these little flash backs. This is done so well. I don't have enough space or else I could go on for hours & pages with my rambling.

& I have been waiting for some angst by you. I missed it since Figment. You already know I have been pushing you to do Miz/Adam for quite sometime. & I have been open to E&C more than ever. This is like a perfect scenario for me. A young stud, with so much fresh hunger & strength after what he wants...or what he feel obsessed with...then we have Christian...the mature stud who has all the heart & care he wanna give to his lover. Adam...our beautiful sweet mess. This triangle equation is majorly hot. The scenario & characterization, plus how wonderful even the first chapter was didn't make it a hard decision for me when I called it my new fav.

Like I told u before, I love this 'man enough' theory with Miz. This works so fucking well. & see when I say your such a thoughtful author? U knew it would have to be worked differently. You even thought bout a younger/older guy relationship. God...I love you so fucking much. & your intelligence..it makes me fall in love with every bit of you.

Fuck fuck fuck...Miz's aggression...Gawd...he was so fucking HAWT from the get go. Just the way it started, he stormed in...being so damn dangerous & scary...He is such a sexy man. & u did him complete justice. When other people turn me off from certain characters, you give me their best.

*Giggles* I love how he called him blondie...smurfette is like I have been wanting Miz to taunt Adam with in a fic since he did it on-screen ;P & u were so good with your words & sentencing when you put Miz's picture from the scene. Right on the spot & so easily imaginable.

Oh Gawd...I love how Miz is talking to Edge...He's here to prove a point. & he's so sickeningly evil, yet hot as fuck. The way he taunted Edge for being Christian's little pet...it was awesome. & Adam's come back is so weak...he's intimidated.

Well...Christian IS Adam's guardian/protector. But Miz..I can't get over how hot he is being in this scene...

I am loving this storyline. Its well-worked too. Honestly, I don't blame Miz for snapping. Losing an ass like Adam's...it is insulting for a man like Miz. As for Adam, he should have had tell Christian. & I have always wanted to read this kind of scenario with Adam being blackmailed, but not whole-ly a victim..like Miz is somewhat of a victim here too...so thank you so damn much for fulfilling my desire & carving once again.

Their confrontation...it made me so hot. Miz's arrogance...his evilness...Adam's defiance..his fear...beautiful mixture.

The images Miz's dirty talk is putting in my head..God, his intimidation...& Adam is like a perfect sexy old women who used a young angry stud lol...This is AMAZING!

This is the most brilliant Miz EVER! Seriously! I just want more of this story...Please Terrah, make it your priority..I am feeling addicted!

Oh damn...SO FUCKING HAWT! Despite it being forced, I loved how Adam quickly turned into a cockslut to make it easy on him. You write him so brilliantly. Do such justice with his looks & potential.

OMG...the tape...if there is a tape of Adam riding Miz...I would die fucking happily. This has been one of my long time fantasy..where Adam is blackmailed for a sex tape lol.

I think this worked better than a rape. This story is perfect in every aspect. & yes, I badly want more of it. I am hungry.

THANK YOU & LOVE YOU! You r fucking brilliant. I love how Adam & Miz both are victim/somewhat evil at different points in this story. God...I wanna kiss the writer out of ya silly sometimes. Gonna go onto next chapter soon now!
Ambrosealley88 chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Yes Jay something is up. It's called a weasel named Miz being a dickface. Now smite him with your awesome Jay powers *nods*
BellaHickenbottom chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Omg this is gonna be awesome! I never really thought of Adam and Miz together but I think I like it. So can't wait for more!
SlytherinQueen020 chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Jay is going to beat the shit outtta of the Miz!
notherenotyet chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Yep, I'm in for the ride ;)

More plese!
Ambrosealley88 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Ooh man, Mike is a dick *kicks him* Poor Adam :(

Great start though :)
takers dark lover chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Oh this should be good. Oh and I really hate Miz he is such a dick! And him touching Adam boy that makes me mad!
I believe in you chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Why is this fic in the wrong category? lol

Anyways, cool fic!