That was amazing!

That was too OOC for me but hey I liked that masako got dissed and Naru turned her down and crap :D I hate masako she bugs me and was even black mailing naru when I found out I wanted to kill her

SERVES YOU RIGHT MASAKO HARA ! and I just loved the way you got Mai and Naru together x

...Masako should be able to get out. I mean the lock is on the insode where she is lol.
But yay for Mai and Naru! :) I cant believe Mai forgot her birthday though...didnt she?

That was too Good Man that was the best! i was rolling on the floor in my class room belive me I have witness!

LMFAO that was halarious! im lauphing so hard that i can barely type this and my sides are hurting so bad XD make some more oneshots and ill lauph

nice!

Here i review! the story in its self was cute and heart warming! Masako is crazy but i don't think she would be that crazy... I alsoliked your daiolog! you put feeling into the words each person spoke with out much help from adjetives. THATS A GOOD QUALITY TO HAVE IN WRITING! if anythingI think you need to work on is your description and plot line, the story flowed but hot as freely as i think you wanted. OH! And also i liked the fact that you made sure that all the readers questions where answered by the end of the story! Good work and keepgoing girly!

I totally wished Bou-san could have killed her! I hate Masako with my very being and that was even before I read this! Totally loved the story, especially where Masako gets locked in!

i enjoyed it alright. Masako took what she deserved and poor Mai...she was harased physical and emotionally. they god Naru was with our Mai, and also for his suprise about her birthday, the whole thing with the picnik, the cake and confession i bet was the best gift ever! special after the day she had. kawaii!

keep the great work! i reall would like to read more stories with MAIxNARU together, they are so perfect and kawaii together, the crazy relationship they have is boiling the blood everyones waiting what will happen next.

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

c ya!

I love it please make more its apsolutly funny and cool best read so far bye bye

Omg that was so cute and so funny at one the way you ended it was so hilarious and that cute scene in the park,Love it it was os awzum!

LOL! i think Masako was a little to dramatic but hey she got her just diserts! I loved it, super cute!

Ok if the wound on her thigh is deep like the miko said why not take her to get some treatment on it and not out to a dinner outside where she can get the wound infected that's all I can think about while trying to finish this story. I mean she's going to need stitches right and to see if there's any tea cup glass in the wound. The miko should of took her to the hosptial not told her shed be back with stuff.

AWESOME! this was soooo funny and romantic too! :D