This last one was great !

I have just read through every chapter, and I just want to compliment you, on how much you've grown as a writer! All of the ideas are good, and interesting, and it is truly a joy to read! especially some of the later chapters!

In my humble opinion you portray Kaito and Shinichi incredibly well! I like all kinds of fic where the two of them interact regardless of whether it's in a platonic or romantic kind of way, as long as I feel the characterization is spot on, and the interaction between them believable and I just want you to know that it has truly been a joy reading your fic. Looking forward to more, whenever you feel like it. No pressure though :D. Good things are worth waiting for!

Favorite Part: Kaito finding Shinichi in the book store. It just felt like a major thing and it led up to the confrontation of Shinichi realizing how dangerous it could be.

And about the rewrite, (no offense) but yeah, I think that would be a good idea. The side effect ideas are good but your characterization is a bit “eh”

Either way, I still enjoyed reading the fic and thank you for updating it

LOL , Oh, OF COURSE Haibara would secretly be Lucifer's daughter !

This is amazing. You are right that your writes have been improved. This last chapter is very beautiful and I definitely love it. how you describe the emotions, the thoughts it almost realistic.

You know, if don't have any idea, maybe you could try about temporary and/or situational paralysis. It's weird, but the idea of Kaito bridal-carry Shinichi every time he dropped or suddenly lose his ability to walk when he tired or stressed is kinda cute, don't you think so? It's going to be a bit depressing but cut nonetheless, LOL.

Okay, just a little suggestion, hope to see you again :)

Can you write a chapter about how one of the cure's side effects changes/affects Kaito instead of Shinichi? I think it would be pretty interesting to read.
My favorite chapter that you've written so far is the one about Shinichi being part cat. I thought how he got captivated by the cat toy and dove was hilarious. It was also cute when he purred because Kaito was petting his ears.
Well, hope you continue writing! I believe you can (re) get the hang of it. I like your writing. Hope to read more soon!

Nicenicenicenice

To be honest, I did find the later chapters better than the first ones. Though the story lines were nice, it is only the way how fast the pacing seemed to be that made it lacking than the later chapters. Still, they were interesting and fun. Good job on your work, author-san. Looking forward for more interesting side effects!

Also, one of my favorites is the pregnancy side effect. It sho cuteee ω

I like the way you write them too. I also like the way you write Haibara.

I agree that the Truth one was kind of awkward, but I think it was the only one that stood out that way.

Particularly loved the fish one and the last two, though a lot of them were fun. I look forward to seeing what you come up with nxt.

Very nice. I definitely liked this one. I enjoyed Kaito and Shinichi’s thoughts, and their interactions were cute. :) It felt natural and very them.

The comment about Sonoko was also quite funny.

I really love this 33333333

Me entertained, thumbs up!

This is my favorite so far 3. Thank you for the update!

Damn, i really love the latest chapter.

Me entertained, thumbs up ;).

I am mad at myself for not finding this fic sooner. Thank you for making my day :’). I LOVE THIS