| Reviews for While I Kiss You |
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gaylelbf chapter 1 . 7/31/2018 Smutty |
Syriel1 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 WOW ! c'était trop sexy et limite ils été avec moi dans la chambre tellment c'est vivant ... |
OCDdegrassi chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 So incredibly sexy. I've always wanted to read a story where Merlin was the experienced one, and Arthur wasn't, but I've never been able to find one! You just made my day. Awesome fic. |
ScorBug92 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012 It would be great if you did something else (either a chapter or a different story all together) that had their first time. |
odessa spirit chapter 1 . 12/14/2011 Loved the story. One of the best written love scenes I've ever read. Your descriptions were so real and breathtaking. Very hot! |
Grizzo chapter 1 . 8/2/2011 Like your writing, will be reading more...thx...gr |
remioromen1344 chapter 1 . 5/20/2011 hawtness abound. D |
Sharon T chapter 1 . 5/16/2011 Very steammy ,I loved it. |
Penelope Snape chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 So freakin hot! |
lilithaofsherwood chapter 1 . 4/5/2011 awwww. |
Storylover158 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011 Hot though seemed half completed |
JuliaHearts chapter 1 . 4/1/2011 ahhhh this was SO good 3 so INCREDIBLY written, and so hot 3333 amazing |
Syrus chapter 1 . 4/1/2011 That was really well done! It's pretty reasonable to think that Arthur might actually be a little inexperienced in the area of physical intimacy, since I'm sure as a prince, he must feel as though he has to be a little choosy about his bed partners, haha. And I thought Merlin reacted just the way he should have, letting Arthur know that he wouldn't be ridiculed for his inexperience and gently guiding him as they went along. It was incredibly sweet and really hot. Once again, great job! XDD |
Beizanten chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 THis is extremely hoT! Love unexperience nervous arthur, normally Merlin is the virgin considering he touch a unicorn! |
The Black Rose16 chapter 1 . 3/28/2011 Arthur was very cute. |