I can't believe I've never reviewed this before... I love it! So beautifully written, and you captured Jake wonderfully... amazing! :-)

I love the voice of Jake here, just perfectly pitched throughout and the story is a really cute and sexy short.

My God, this one-shot is flawless. F**king brilliant. There is nothing wrong with it.

Whoa. How did I miss this one? That was hot. I remember when audreyii gave mera_naam the same prompt, but I didn't know you had done one as well. So slow and so achingly realistic. Great job. :)

Glad for option 3! ;D

Nicely done!

great story!

so incredibly sexy! loved it!

Sweet!

That was amazing. Trust Jake to think of a perfect option 3. Truly he is the PERFECT guy! And you capture him so well. What a great *blush* one shot.

I read this once on LJ, when audreyii-fic gave the link on Twitter, and I think I must have been tired-really tired-when I read it, as I didn't remember the last part. LOL

Anyway.

I absolutely loved this, and I like how you have kept the essence of the characters, but still added your own style to it. A *very* delightful read. (*cough* In more than one way.)

And, lastly, because I feel it needs to be reiterated (and because I adore Jacob's character): you portrayed him brilliantly. *loves*

OMG i love this its so hot and so sweet at the same time! i hope you continue this! Please?

SO. HOT. GAH.

Seriously. I can never read New Moon again. This was how it should have been! It was perfect, just perfect.

Loved it!

That was the most amazing. AMAZING. Jacob & Bella story i've read so far. Please... continue being a great writer... you have a gift!