no wonder there's only a few follow on your story trashy author

yeah everything is good until the baby scene where it became trash he literally killed your kid and you didn't even do a thing what a trash harry they can send them to azkaban but no harry is a saint so its fine what a trash author

Nice good

I gonna read the sequel just finished this story. Well it's good but you made a big mistake really.. People could only see that Ron and Hermione were not together anymore.
H & H hide there relationship even Ron doesn't seem to now there engaged? So how the hell does a person that they don't know she's pregnant from the start?
That moment ruines the rest of the story flat out, cause Harry shouldn't kill not become a murderer. oh sjeesh i don't know didn't they came out of a war he killed voldemort.
Oh and another out of the blue ginny's unkown friend uses a potion, after what lavender did Harry wouldn't act like that. strange behavior from H & H?

Be careful with issues such as content and legalities, but more Harry/Hermione is a good thing.

Shouldn't the shock have killed him?

I really enjoyed reading your story. Some of the flow didn't make sense but it was great.

Aww poor Harry and Hermione

I couldn't really see her doing that to their baby especially without telling Harry. It seems really random

I hope you dont sent me death sets! Lol love the story

porque tu terquedad de emparejar a ron con luna , digo luna no se fijaría en alguien como ron es ridiculo.
la verdad me molesta esa pareja , no se con lavanda podria los dos encajan

She got her, what was the significance of the X on her necklace? Why didn't they tell her parents about the engagement?

Enjoying your story hoping they go and report what happened, I thought Harry was going to get her an engagement ring?

Ron, Ron who? I know he is their friend but honestly all he does is complain about stuff and treat Hermione like something he stepped in! I for one am glad that Ron is pushed away and Harry and Hermione are together!

This is the second story of yours I'm reading today and I must say you really do like having the two of them jump straight in the sack. Just seems really out of character for Hermione to not even wait a day to properly break up with Ron first. I'm guessing most of the rest of the story wouldn't be possible if she'd done that though. I'll probably drop another note when I finish.