You are such an amazing writer. I love all of your little one shots so much, if some less then others. You should make a ongoing story. If it was Half as good as your one shots it would still be amazing. I truly adore your works. Keep writing and never stop.

Oh that's wonderful.
I've heard of congratulatory menstruation cakes, but that was much better.
Although a red velvet cake with that kind of message would just be nasty...Ew.

Mr. Egbert is probably the best character in Homestuck. Ever. Anyways, this was one of the funniest stories I have ever read for this fandom. It was well characterized and the interactions were incredibly funny and cute.

Dat cake though. I kinda wished someone would do that for me. ;)

OH MY GOD I JUST LOST IT! XD
This is FUCKING. GENIUS.

BEST JOHN/ROSE I HAVE EVER READ.
I'm laughing so hard that I'm crying you don't even know.

That last line just made the whole piece. I laughed out loud for about half a minute.
-L.M.

Awww That was so cute! There's not enough grimdork in the world. Great characterization. UuU

That would be just creepy if he was staring while they were kissing or something. No that IS creepy that he stared, but kinda funny

Pure genius!

You have no idea,

How hard I laughed,

At the cake's inscription.

This truly is a great and well-written story. So adorable, befitting of all three's personalities, and filled with shenanigans. What more could one ask?

Keep writing!

- Audio.

This... was flawless. Seriously.

Oh my god, the CAKE. I died. XD The whole concept behind this is fantastic!

Oh my God that was absolutely BRILLIANT. I really love the sweet, fluffiness between John and Rose throughout all of it, and especially Rose's analysis of Dad. And I can't believe I'm saying it, but Dad's comment was literally the icing on the cake of this story for me.

How sweet!

And the cake bit- that made me laugh.

i- oh god this was 3 i loved it