Beautiful! Luv it!

I don't mind the OOCness too much :) it's super hot story. If only hook ups were actually like this ... *sigh*

Despite them being OOC, I really liked it. I'm heading off to read parts II and III right now, to see how else their relationship is going to start to expand. I also think the 'short-sweet-to the point' writing you're doing for this story is working completely.
Thanxs! :) :p ;)

You are a fanfiction writing god. SUPER AWESOME!

Love it.

Nice :3 i always love your work

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I like how Maka's reacting to Soul...hee hee...Can't wait to read the rest of this!

Gotta admit, not usually a fan of AU, but this is definitely awesome!

Figured I'd start your series from the beginning and I must say, I certainly wasn't disappointed. You always have the best writings!

soooooo awesome! love everry part of it!

haha, go maka, go, ;)

Omg that was awesome ;)

ahhh I loved it!

It was really intresting reading about the addiction that is Soul, I think it would be great if you wrote about the Soul side of things. Like how she was his addiction. I must admit I hated Hiro in it god he sucked, Soul should have kicked his ass.

But all round brilliant story that is now going in my favorites :D

xxx

I really liked this AU personally. It's cute and pretty darn sexy, in my opinion. As for Maka, I do see why you changed her personality a little, but it somehow fits with the canon!Maka. It's hard to explain, but the point is that you did an excellent job, and I always look forward to seeing more of your work.

That was awesome.

interesting