Reviews for You Need to Shut Up |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good one-shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute little one-shot! I enjoyed it! I wish there was more! :) -Yvonne |
![]() ![]() Write more! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe this is freaking cute! I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() d'aww |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! This was really cute! I like it! XD :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is soooooooo cute. I don't ship them, but this is ridiculously adorable. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, very sweet the ending surprised me. Wish it was longer... ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god, that was SO sweet! There really need to be more LuffyxCoby fanfictions, good job How about a longer one, hm? ;) |
![]() ![]() it was good until the kiss... the kiss totally ruined it for me. -_-' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I wasn't sure how this would turn out clicking on the fic, but that was so sweet! There definitely does need to be more Luffy x Coby, especially if it's this adorable! The characterization in this was well done, and this scene between them was so honest and realistic, as in Coby would apologize to Luffy on the Marines' behalf and Luffy would blamelessly forgive him (actually I'm not sure if the scene has really happened or not in the canon-verse since I haven't gotten that far :D directly ignoring your warning, but I'm not a person to mind spoilers and wanted to read this, so I hope you'll forgive me :). Heh. If there ever was a pirate who managed to sail the sky, it would be Luffy. Also, though the last words Luffy tells Coby is to shut up, I can just imagine the smile on his face as he says that. X) Thanks for writing~ |