This story was spectacular. I recently re-played Dragon Age 2 and couldn't get enough Fenris, so I went online looking for DA2 stories. I was so happy to find this. Your writing is superb and your characters are so well developed. You did an amazing job.

That was a lovely story. I enjoyed how it varied from the original game storyline. Though I would have loved to see these two take on the Inquisition storyline as well, I enjoyed how and where you ended this. At some point I will take the time to enjoy their other adventures as well. Hopefully once they are no longer spoilers for dlc I haven't played. I love how the whole thing with Orsino, and Meredith ended differently. Really those two should have just dueled and left everyone else out of it. It was a pity Sebastian didn't survive and everyone went their own ways after everything. I can only hope Varric gets a happy ending in here somewhere too. I was hoping for him and Merrill, but she was just too elfy in this to be with him I guess.

Just have to pause a moment and say that while I love this pairing in general and this story in particular, Debris angst has nothing on Solas angst. lol

I've been reading this for the past couple of days and the scene at the end of this chapter where Fenris calls her his heart I busted out into tears. This story is amazing. Ugh, breaking my heart!

That was amazing. I read it all in one night. And now its 4 am and I'm going to sleep and dream of Fenris. Perfect story.

Oh my gosh this story may actually kill me... *sigh* You're awesome.

Hahahahaha that was perfect. I love it. Can't wait to read more (because really, bioware left me with nothing to go on here...)

You won't believe how happy I was when I read 'There is a sequel in progress.' thank you for this story, it was fantastic. It was a bit fast paced in some places when characters were changing their location, but you captured their personalities correctly. keep up the good work!

Awwwwwww
True confession: I couldn't ethier until the sene she dies even then i just kinda became neatural towards her

Nice work love it it's so verge amazing

At every 'Sweeny Todd' reference, i squeal and clap my hands and my family looks at me like I've lost my bloody mind.

I didn't really like Hawke's mother either but I understood her actions as a desperate mother who'd already lost one child.
Loving this story so much, the banter between all the characters flows so well. It's 3am and I just want to keep reading.

Love the friendship between Varric and Merill, very sweet.

Love it so far :)

Even though I'm stumbling over this story late in the game, I'm liking how you are enter twining Sweeney Todd and Dragon Age. Two of my obsessions in one, its perfect.