| Reviews for Hate and Pity |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2014 Will there be... More? |
JedTheStageHand chapter 1 . 5/20/2011 Hmm... I really like this! You wrote it very well! Good job and keep up the good work! |
Farla chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 [focussed ] Spellcheck. A nice look at Aradia and you did a good job portraying her mindset as a ghost and robot. I wish you'd focused a bit more on her before her death, just for contrast - all that's really shown is her mad at Vriska, which, eh. Why were they playing against the Scourge Sisters repeatedly in that case, and if Vriska's already mauling Tavros it's odd to be so shocked and indignant she later cripples him. And if that's all there is, why's Vriska so upset about ghost!Aradia? I do like the explanation for why she keeps Sollux at arm's length and the way you show Equius' interest, though. |