I tried finding the story on wwomb. Did you take it down? I can't find it by title or your penname

Poor Ms. D'Arcy...

Jenna's "father" was an utter bastard

Are tony and Jenna half siblings? Angela recognized the names Gibbs and dinozzo but she had already met Gibbs. Also, a rich, charming married businessman with a wife and a kid and suspicious dealings in the Middle East? Sounds like Dinozzo senior

Thank you letting us know where to find the rest of the story!

Hi, just want to say I love this story & I hope that you can update the story here. I went to the other site to finish reading this story but I could not read the format this it is written in as it just dosen't flow together like this one dose for me. :)

Good story it has interesting characters and a good plot. Like some of the extra stuff you sneak in like Celtic music information and then such a little thing turns into something important. This piece of information was very very small.

Are Tony and Jenna related? Because everything seems to be hinting towards that. Please update this! You can't just leave it like this! Please? You've written other things since then. Please write this. I need this! Keep it up!

Please update this story again soon. I have really enjoyed reading it and can't wait to see what happens next.

I think I want to cry, knowing that this hasnt been updated since 2011

where are the other chapters. this story is great will keep looking for more chapters.

I just read the entire story and I think that it's really good. I have a feeling that Tony and Jenna and half brother and sister...I keep imaging Tony walking in the squad room with just about everyone in there, including Jenna and her mom, and Jenna's dad on the big screen and Tony going "I hope you guys aren't talking about me!" And McGee going, "Believe it or not Tony but the world doesn't revolve around you." And Tony going, "Wow, thanks for that wonderful piece of knowledge but what do you expect when I walk in and see my bastard of a father on the big screen?" O.O lol Your story, not mine, sorry. My imagination was running away with me again. heh heh...Again I love the story though and I hope that you continue to wright. Can't wait to read more! :D

The drive from DC to any Southern part of New York is at least 5 hours. It just seems like the crime scene is close to the office. Other then that I like the story.

I just happened across this story, and spent my whole lunch break catching up with the previous chapters-this is good stuff! I like the OCs, they're appealing and well-detailed, and I like the canon characters, they're very much on form. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story.

really good

I like how Tony talked to Geld, he so deserved it.

Too funny! I like the bit about the Jerry Springer show too. Hard for a parent to find out that her daughter got married without her though.