great! love how you handled the save in the last minute... too bad tali died, though Im not sorry for zaeed and jacob... and big for jack and miri getting friendlier, though their fights are always fun to watch/read :)))

And you once more impress me with your mastery of the characters. Well done sir.

I liked this. Though it was kind of gut wrenching to see so many good people go down, I liked it. You captured Shepard and Miranda's relationship perfectly, and your horny Miranda reminds me of my own, heh. And extra cookies to you for EDI's super epic sense of humor, thanks to Jeff Joker Moreau. Also, Jack and Miranda becoming friends is also a big bonus (over 9000, in fact) for the epicness of your fic.

"Busy...getting busy?" Epic win. 'Nuff said. Well done. Please write more of this, this site DESPERATELY needs it.