Moooooooore. Great interactions!

I really enjoyed this. It fit right in with the episode but gave so much insight to what could have been happening in between the scenes. Great work!

Very well done! The character voices, the pacing & the vignettes were all very true to the show. I also liked the idea of Zane testing hypotheses on why Jo's acting differently. That seems very much like what he'd do!

I liked this a lot. :) Nicely done!

Wow that was really good. You really got into the characters head in a way that made everything cohesive. I cant wait for the next chapter. Please write a next chapter!

That was beautiful. Please write more missing scenes fic.

I like your idea of taking the one episode and showing where the characters start and end over that period of time. You've explored a lot of nice moments between the two that fit right in with the characters and how they would react under the circumstances. You really tapped into their potential. It was a lovely read.

One word...AWESOME. You did a fantastic job with making the story mainly Zane's POV. Capturing his struggle with the change in Jo's behavior. Thanks so much for continuing to write ff for this fandom and for writing long stories in one go.

Can't wait for the next one. Maybe a sequel with mainly Zane's POV.