Sad but I don't think Ace would be too happy that Lufy took his own life, but oh wel! :(

This should be more then k, suicide should be at least T

I liked it but i think that ace would be kicking his ace not welcoming him but it was a good read.

the reason he didn't kill himself is because he acutally said, that if he didn't try with everything he had and just laid there, and ace died. that would make him want to kill himself.

but he did get to try with everything he had left, so he didn't kill himself.

I think the idea is sad, yet good, and I really like it!

However, as constructive critisisim I would like to say that it would be better if it were little bit longer :) The story has more potential in my opinion. Luffy does have a strong personality and will, so seeing him intentionally take his own life with a knife is hard to imagine. I think it would be more fitting to his personality to keep trashing around and punching trees and cliffs down with his inhuman force, till he collapses and loses consciousness and then dying would be more appropriate to his charater, maybe?

If the story were a little longer, it would be easier to make it more emotional and to really see what was going inside the characters mind and heart.

But, again! I really liked the story! So don't feel offended or anything, just thought I'd share my thoughts with you :)

So sad and beautiful...I love it

This is so sad π.π

Ace and Luffy are together again but now Luffy's crew would never be able to see Luffy again..

I think the reason why Luffy didn't kill himself was because he still had to live on for his crew and his dream :3

GREAT STORY!

KEEP WRITING!~

I am very sad because Luffy took his own life, but also happy because he's with Ace and, soon, Sabo, again. Great job on the story, by the way.

I loved it! It reminds me of Evanescence's new song, "Together Again." Great job! :)