I wish this would have actually happened.

That definitely should have been in the actual show, wonderful.

"staring at you like you're wearing a different face" this line make my stomach tighten into a knot, in a very, very good way. I love your style verging on anger but full of real love and passion. Please write more, what happens after the episode ends and Aidan gets ready to leave the house, not sure when he will return...

This scene was totally missing from that epi. So great! I don't remember the exact cage logistics so this is probably fine. The second person perspective is always jolting, and in this case, appropriately so. Sometimes I think this show would be better as a book because I always want to know whats going on in their heads when shit goes down. Anyway, great work. I'm convincing myself this actually happened between them. :)

This is so very well done. Hot, angsty, and something I could believe, especially with the reactions at the end. Love it. 3

SQUEEE! That was so hot and you wrote it beautifully!

Ohhh good job! :D

this was good :D 2nd person was a little weird to read but over all i still liked it

This is very good.