You write so beautifully. I love it!

I love your writing so so much. Please continue this story!

Oh finally! "The Talk" is here!

The way you capture the Hyugas is beyond intriguing. I love every word of it and I read it slowly so that I can enjoy each sentence.

Yayyy! We're finally progressing! I can't wait to see something happen between them!

Oh, my heart :'(

Oh my. This is a beautiful story, the kind that hooks seroous readers for years. Is there anychance of this seeing the end?

Hinata must have felt fooled at the meeting when Neji suddenly told the elder that he would be honored to be Hinata's bethroted. At least she's not bethroted to Sasuke.

I loved the part when Neji went on a treasure hunt. It made me remember my childhood. I'm really curious why did Neji hid Hinata's doll. Why didn't he give it to Hinata immediately. Maybe because of the locked down in the compound that's why he wasn't able to give it to her.

Really excited for the next chapter. I really hoped that you would update this story.

Just can'r get enough of this fic. I've been reading it for a couple of times now :3

Awesome chapter! I really loved the last part. Hmm i thought that the doll was missing?As i remembered Neji even went to search for it? Why did he hide it?

Awww poor Hinata. Neji was so blinded with rage.

Yes!

Excellent fic. Detailed, subtle, gentle, poignant, and beautifully in character. It gives a vibrant but mysterious impression of life at the Hyuuga compound, a brilliant mixture of politics, supressed emotions, rivarlies and unspoken implications.

Hyuuga-centric fics are something I really, really love. However, they are very difficult to -get right-, mostly because it is very easy to slip into an ugly stereotype, such as an overly abusive Hiashi, a wholly sociopathic Hanabi, or a completely irrational Elder Council. You, though, have managed to avoid all these traps, tip-toeing gracefully through the Naruto timeline, and creating a fine fic, with a lovely, canon feeling to it.

Please, keep on writing. I cannot wait to see where you will be taking this, especially the relationship between Neji and Hinata, and the one between Hinata and her younger sister.

Cheers.

So it was him who took the doll! I would love to read a new chapter of this fic!

I LOVED THIS. i hope you update soon! beautiful writing!

lovely story! i love it so far and i look forward to continue reading it! :)

Very much enjoying this. Your characterization of Hinata's mother is particularly fascinating, as well as your talent for connecting everything together despite the interrupted timeline.