| Reviews for Fine Lines and True Signs |
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   TexasAvery chapter 5 . 5/31/2016 I DONE READED ALL FIIIIIIVE _ Holy shit, those first and fifth ones. Whew. I really wanted to see something, heh... happennnnn... So, did you know you've got the Ranma/Akane repartee locked DOWN, by any chance? Because you do - I might go so far as saying that I like reading their interactions best when you're the one writing them, because it almost seems like you give a damn about keeping them in-character, and true to themselves. Quite refreshing, really. You are great. How'd you get to be so great? Enjoy your greatness, and use it to keep writing great stuff like this. |
| Ranma4801 chapter 5 . 7/28/2015 Niice, I loved the last one! I hope you write more soon, I love the way Ranma thinks about Akane, his jealousy and his protective ways are just soo cute :) |
| NiniCool chapter 5 . 7/18/2014 I love what you write ! I ope you'll go on writing short silly story like thoses. They are great ! :D |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/21/2014 YIKES! my brain exploded I'm laughing and crying at the same time |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/21/2014 Poor Ranma! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/21/2014 OOOOO delicious tension |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/21/2014 stubborn, proud, and completely cute very well written I'm in love... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2014 I love how stubborn they both are |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/28/2014 Oh my gosh this made my day. I literally laugjed out loud! Please write more! xD |
| UrmixMoonstone chapter 5 . 5/21/2014 Loved the last pun. Hard indeed. You really get into the character. I can totally imagine Ranma's mind working like that. |
| pahlee chapter 5 . 5/19/2014 AHHH! This was so sweet, I enjoyed it all the way through and at the end I couldn't stifle my giggle at her comment and just laughed pretty loudly. You captured their characters well and I enjoyed it, moments like that make them...them. 10/10 |
| Lady Ski chapter 5 . 5/18/2014 LOL "you are hard" Love the oneshot! :) Hope you update soon! |
| Telly Vee chapter 5 . 5/15/2014 I read this three times and I still do not know if I like it. Tbh Ranma annoyed me. However I also thought he was unlikeable and irritating during this story in the manga so idk maybe that's a good thing. I will say that I do like your dialogue. It captures their interaction nicely. |
| rage98 chapter 5 . 5/14/2014 I laughed so much at the ending! keep it up! |
| tuatara chapter 5 . 5/14/2014 This was quite cute and as well written as previous installments. Though Ranma really did effectively say, "Hey, girl. Sure, you may be fat, weak and mostly helpless, but that’s why I love ya. Don’t ever change, baby!” …Okay, I took a bit of artistic license with my translation, but the point still stands. Anyway, thanks for posting. Good work. |
