THIS WAS SO CUTE! Goodness, you're a really good writer. I liked how you described everything without really being too deep. c:

Wow... Sweet, but... kinda sad, too... Bittersweet? Anyway, beautiful one-shot, it went straight to my heart. Beautiful writing style too, had me breathless. Thank you for posting this story.

Loved this to peices!

Why was Kyo looking at her funny all the time though?

I watched FB only half way thru. The series left abandoned in my hard drive, having made way for other animes. But your story is making me dig the series out again, curious to how they ended...I know that Tohru ended up with Kyo instead of Yuki (I'm a TY shipper, even tho I have always been an underdog supporter). But with your story, I'm not sure anymore...thank you, thank you. Do write more... :)

you cant end it there :( but really really good!

Yes.

I give this 2 thumbs up and a nice cookie to go along with them!

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