Reviews for E Malama Maikai
Skimball4 chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
Loved it! I like reading a story where Chin isn't off while all the action takes place.
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Tee hee. Nice!
miss-tarletone chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I really enjoyed this! I loved the way you wrote it from chin's point of view, with little digressions alloying the way.
annoyedErma chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
This was amazing, I couldn't stop laughing throughout the entire thing. You should definitely do a sequel.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is absolutely adorable. I need more protective Chin in my life.
SpnH50Sg chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Love it!
Halle Alexis chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
I really liked this! It's always fun to have an outside perspective like this.
tyger cub chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Omg, I love love love this story! Very well written!
honeybadgerwrath chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Loved the look into the characters' relationship from Chin's perspective, particularly one as detailed and in depth as you've written here.
tiffu chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Thank you for this, it is very well done! Sweet and charming. But now I am desperately hoping you'll follow-up with Kono bringing home a certain tattooed former SEAL to meet the parents. With Chin wincing in the background at a dinner gone bad. Ha!
byebyebirdy chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
oh my god that was awesome! you should write a follow up chapter where he actually catches them kissing or something! then the shit would hit the fan ;) follow up! please continue!
Ai.yahweh chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Haha.. I like this one! It makes me laugh ]

Thank u for the fic ]

Write more ~ there's not enough fic about this absolutely amazing pairing here ]
lynnrxgal chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Interesting take on Steve and Kono... I really enjoyed the read!
The North Wyn chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I love it! Definitely going straight to faves. :) It's hilarious and sweet at the same time. I have too many favorite lines to quote them all, but I think this one is my absolute favorite: "Conversely, Boss has disturbing tendency to end up shirtless - at work, too (sexual harassment!). Even Ben Bass - a surfer - knew enough to stay shirt-ful." :-D Also: "It doesn't stop his own protective instincts; if she were to grow up to be a mother and a grandmother and the governor of Hawaii she'd still be his baby cousin." Aww! 3

Thanks for sharing the links to those pictures, too! So cute! Oh, and hi again! :)
illuminazione chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I really liked this. I especially like the way it was written from Chin's perspective. Very probable.

yours

satori
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