Wonder why Carim was mad? O.o

Great chap can't wait for the next

Well, well, soldier...

This was nice!

Oh, and happy birthday, too! O

This was very much ful of Hayate-ness, and I LOEV Hayate-ness! (Heart)

And of course, Carim ain't all that bad herself! ;D

LOL at the "Graciously" pun. LOL Worst. Pun. EVAR!

And W00T! Carim is teaching Hayate Italian! :D This oughta be good!

Nice work!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Another wonderful chapter! Happy belated birthday by the way. :)

I really love how you've captured Hayate's personality in this piece. Well done!

I look forward to your next chapter. :)

Well, well, soldier...

LOL

LMAO

ROFL

This was very nice!

Gutter-minded!Hayate FTFW! XD Too bad she didn't join NanoFate to make a NanoHayaFate sandwich...

But still!

She needs some LOEV from everyone's fave Gracious Angel! ;D

And ROFLOL at Carim being Italian. Why don't'cha toss in some Italian words or sentences? THAT would N-I-CE! O

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I know, I've been playin' WAY too much "Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood". U

But anyway!

This thing looks very interesting! ;D

Mission start!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

First, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR A HAYATE X CARIM FF! -Ehem- Anyways, the gutter mind Hayate is hilarious. Love her.

Seriously can't wait for more of the story!

This is off to a great start! I absolutely love it! While NanoFate is typically my first favorite couple, I do have a soft spot for Hayate. You capture her personality so well in this piece! I love it!

Keep up the great writing! I look forward to your next chapter. :)