Very deep and thinking!

Very good UPDATE!

2 words. Love. It.

This time I am officially logged in. I was so happy when I saw a second chapter. I thought it wasn't going to happen and it made me sad :( but you updated so :D. This fic has made me so curious. As for your demon anatomy, you thought it out in enough detail to make it believable. Also, you of all people have every right to make up your own words xD. Keep up the good work! Ciao!

This story was... wow...

The narration, Sebastian's situation - such frustration, such failure, and binding - such ANGST!

Good vocabulary, and intriguing style that conveys what's going on

Please do not let this be a one-shot. *tears* I hated the ending for Kuro. Poor Sebby. Anyway this was awesomely written. You are my new hero. Keep up the good work.