After a (...) you need to put a space and the first letter needs to be a capital leter just like you would do with (!), (?) or..

PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEE
I NEED MORE
YAOI
*nosebleed*

I am sad that this had if yet not continued. I was hoping for more lol. Good story, I will favorite and follow it in hopes that you will update someday.

Really loved how you kept Yukimura's why of speaking and how their relationship devolved. Would love to read more if its possible.

PLEASE UPDATE. I really like this story so this cliffhanger is killing me. So please please please update

It sounds like sasuke is a little jealous o.o or that could just be me misunderstanding idk..but this story definitely looks like its going off to something bigger...i hope u keep writing cuz im finding myself unable to stop reading x_x

Im really liking this story so far. The way you write the characters is spot on. i think you're doing an awesome job o !

You're killing me! It's 2013! Don't make me beg!

i want to read more. this is awesome.

Voice cast

Yukimura - Nobuhiko Okamoto (Japanese) Micah Solusod (English)
Masamune - Tatsuhisa Suzuki (Japanese) Robert McCollum (English)
Kojuro - Toshiyuki Morikawa (Japanese) Ian Sinclair (English)
Sasuke - Atsushi Abe (Japanese) Todd Haberkorn (English)
Shingen - Tessho Genda (Japanese) Christopher Ayres (English)

I absolutely love how Masamune called Yukimura "guren." That is so fitting, in diction and placement in the story.
Thank you very much for writing this story! Please continue to write more! :)

Poor Yukimura. That must have been one awkward morning.
Thank you for writing this chapter! Please continue with your story. I really want to read more!

I absolutely love the style of dialogue that you give to Yukimura. Makes me laugh (because it is so true) :)

A shame you abandonned such great story : /

so..so..so much sexual tension. You can literally feel it. *turns puppy eyes to the author* Y-you can't end it there! It was getting to the good part! Evil, evil cliffhanger! Please continue this!