I love this story so much! Amazing work

Kudos!

Fuck THAT. it's weird how fast it took Santana to become submissive. Sure Santana can be vulnerable to the right person under the right circumstance but...Santana has a backbone. What..is...this...blasphemy?! Lmao. good writing!

Good grief! I would chalk it up to Role playing. but CAN'T EVEN see Quinn into that! Bitch, likes control.

what in the fucks...this chapter...like...why would she take that abuse? Maybe a moment...or two of weakness when someone showed get any type of affection, I'm assuming. "Deer in the headlights" so to speak.

It was pretty intense for a while. But I loved how you did there first times. I feel it was realistic for Santana to be scared the first first time. I'm glad they got a happy ending :)

This was good. I do think Quinn deserved a punishment. Had she been Puck or Finn and repeatedly abused and raped Santana then they would have been in jail.

That was a great story. Well thought out and it really drew me in to that world. Well done.

Great read, a little worried - but so glad it had a happy ending :)...nice job!

This story is one of the more difficult stories I've read. It's well written, but the subject matter had me pulling my "I'm reading something that makes me uncomfortable" face. I made it to the end, and I'm happy it's a happy one. I'm not sure how easy or hard this was for you to write, but you did a good job. You really know how to take your readers out of their comfort zone. Well done.

Amazing, and the emotion behind it is very strong and accurate; more accurate than any others I have read. It is very dark and I may have cried through most of it, but it was good. I have been through a very similar situation so it was a little difficult for me to read, but I love the happy ending. It gives hope to the situation... Thanks

Oh my God! it's 2am and you have me in tears!

Damn you! Seriously, the situation is SO fucked up, makes you think if anyone could really recover from something like that.

holy crap that was frickin intense..i just read the whole thing..and yeah both girls were totally messed up! quinn gettin control and takin out her anger on san..and so messed up she beleived she deserved it..asked for it..wanted to be needed (warped sense of cared for) that even the abuse was better then nothing..im glad rach and her fathers were there for her to help her out of the situtation and then on the road to recovery..sad scary story but still job

You need to slow down on 'the Latina'. It's just as awkward as if you started referring to Quinn as 'the Caucasian'. I know everyone in the fandom does it, but it's really bad writing, and you used it a lot in this chapter. It's better - from a writing standards point of view - to just use her name.

i dnt think Quinn got what she deserved and I kept trying to get Santana to listen to Rachel but obviously I dont have story alternating powers.
On the upside Pezberry! I love them and wish they were canon.
This was wonderfully written and I love Pezberrys relationship and how Rachel cares for Santana right off the start, even if it was just as friends. I do admit I wouldve liked to see a little more into Rachels mind; like when she started liking Santana and such but its great without that