goood serie trust and protection hopefully you make this second storie longer then 50.000 words as i do also hope for a third story

Wow, its been awhile. Good to have you back :D Now i'm going to go and re-watch the series again :P

Thanks so much for the update. I'm glad Peter is finally starting to take charge. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Darling, your writing is magnificent. The quality is spot on. However, you have a bad habit of using run on sentences. One you break up the paragraphs, your writing will be unstoppable 3

Did you by any chance hear a blood curdling scream just now? Oh, that was just me when I realized there weren't any more chapters in this ABSOLUTELY AMAZING STORY! I just came across Trust and Protection: Discovery and Recovery today and couldn't put it down. It just ripped my heart out. I know it hasn't been updated since January, but I'm hoping against all hope that you'll pick it up again and finish it. It is sooooooo... good.

it is really a frightening story, but I can't help but LOVE the story. Neal is so cute when he's so weak. Please update ! (sorry for my bad english !)

I don't normally like slash...but this is so emotionally driven that I can't help but love it. Please update soon.

Great story!

loved the first story, looking forward to the rest of this ;)

Oh, I really hope you're going to post this story soon. :)

Uhoh, that sounds like they still have a long road ahead. So, it looks like there will be a lot more angst, h/c and fluff coming up and I'm so looking forward to read it. I hope you haven't given up on your fic. I so enjoyed reading it so far.

I loved that you finally brought El back in. I forgot to say it, but I loved her reaction in the first fic. It was just awesome and I kind of missed her at the end of that fic.

So it is good to have her back and I'd love to see her and Neal meeting again after all these revelations, and also I don't know if I have just overlooked it, but I can't remember reading anything about Peter and Neal discussing how it will go on with 'them' and El. That would be such an interesting conversation. :)

Omo! I love this hun! The way you write is just GORGEOUS!

I especially love the way you capture Neal's personality, and Peters too! But Neal especially lol. Particularly how you show how he wears that mask of his and how he shutters everything behind it. And then there's Peter, I like how Peters able to read Neal despite it all and knows when Neal is trying to distance himself from things.

Oooh and in the prequel how you had Peter going through the ''straight guy syndrome'' LOLOL And then when he finally realised he had feelings for Neal! 3 3 3

Woooo, and all the rape and recovery stuff and all the technicalities of it...Neal's triggers and the flight or fight responses/instincts, you make it sound so freaking real! I can really tell youve done your research, and done it well!

As you might have guessed, I read de prequel to dis, but I didnt review though, sorry bout that, I was just so freaking anxious to keep going and then finally get to this!

Soo I'll leave everything here fa ya. _

Hmmm what else... Oohhhhh! El! I forgot to mention her! I love the kind of woman she is! Despite how little shes mentioned (not that I mind P), in those little tibits her personality really shines through. Especially how she genuinely cares about Neal and loves Peter enough to let him love Neal and not begrudge either. Soo sweet~~ Not many women would allow their husbands to have an affair with another man lol, let alone have known for so many years that their husband was in love with another man and just... wait for it/let it happen.

In this chap though, something is really missing though, and I find when your writing Peter you leave it out too... but then again you may be leaving it out on purpose and saving it for when they finaly have sex.

That Comfort Factor...

Peter... is genuinely a very caring person yeah? And the way your writing his reactions towards Neal when he's having his panic attacks and flashbacks is... kinda 'off' to me cause o de lack of it.

I see Peter as the one who, as soon as Neal has a flashback during when theyre gettin' it on, Peter would stroke his hair or try to ''call'' him back gently, or kiss Neal's neck softly and whisper 'Its alright, its alright,'' and generally soothe Neal and bring him back to the present time and place so he knows its Peter and not one of the men who hurt him.

Dat interaction when theyre at that stage is whats missing fa me. You just kinda jump from when theyre all aroused and then to the point where Peters scolding Neal for leading him on again/ angry/annoyed and sexually frustrated. Yeah sure youd expect that from Peter, put I dun thinks he's the type to completely forget to try and comfort Neal cause of it...

Ehhhhh ... I hope you get what Im tryna say lol, cause Im terible and trying to get across a point without going all round de world. I hope ya dont think Im tryna dictate you or your story or anything like dat.

Overall I really really, REALLY love your story.

*points upwards*

It was all lies.

Do not allow the previous flattery and whispers of love and praise to fool you into thinking I like you.

I despise your existance and I strongly believe... you should be shot at _'

I actually had to go lie down before I wrote dis review, cause when I was reading this... and I finally got to the end... and realised... Dere was no more...

I was like: Fuck me running, is this a sick joke? I even refreshed the god damn page to see if it was a malfunction.

I repeat: You should be shot at.

Now Im gonna come back here in a month...

And if you haven updated, I warn you in advance, the message you get from me, dont even open it, delete one time, cause I'll cuss your ass so badly your eyes'll bleed as you read Y_Y

The email after that would be an (obnoxiously insinsicere) apology (if you still havent updated).

Toodles~~~ _

I like your first chapter. Peter figuring out Neal's plan of distraction. That even Peter talkng about touching Neal prompts a flashback. Poor Peter is caught between his desire to do what's best for Neal, his desire for Neal, and Neal's desire to pretend everything is alright. One question though: The FBI requires mandatory counseling sessions whenever something traumatic happens on duty. It's anywhere from one to three depending on the severity of the event. Then it's up to the doctor whether or not to schedule more. Granted, my Uncle retired a while ago, but I don't think the rules have changed. A session would be an interesting sidebar. Can't wait for the next installment.

Very good story. Please update soon. Thank you

aww poor Neal, i just wanna run up to him an give em big hug and tell him that everything will be ok. but that would only make things worse.

great job. update soon _ Ja.