Reviews for Outcast of Pain
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2018
So, I honestly did not expect this to be so strange. This is a very cold, loveless AU that you have created. But I have to say, I enjoyed it. Different that what I normally read, but still good!
Dragons chapter 4 . 5/3/2018
Noooooooo! Please do more on this.
tmntfan4ever chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
WHAT. IN . THE. FUCK. DID. I. JUST. READ?!
KairiFarron13 chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
God I have never felt so much pain in my life! I felt everything Raph was going through, and it hurts really bad. This was beautifully made but very painful. May I ask for an epilogue? I want to know if justice was served for Raph and Mikey. :')
arlena.ferrell chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
Wow to have been a hidden camera when Leo threatened to rape Mikey just so Don and Splinter could see that Leo wasn't getting better and so Leo could see what he's been doing. This is leaving me inspired.
No More Love chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
Wow very good story :) its well written wit few mess ups but I gotta ask ya ... wat the hell did Leo do ta Raph?
FoxKid1302 chapter 4 . 3/30/2012
One story, 4 chapters. Short, yet it sent me through every possible emotion ever existed. Relief, confusion, rage, despair, sorrow, hope, happiness... You name it. The twisted version of the turtles, of how their family had become only to heighten the flood coursing in me. I read another story where Leo's mind also deraged to similar level, but it was nothing compare to this, and Raph's endurance only helped tighten the clunch in my heart. I admit it was painful, and somewhere along the story I had to stop to calm myself, but here I am at the end of it, writing my heart out for you. It was horribly wonderful...

Thank you for unleashing your imagination upon us...
tmntlover2013 chapter 4 . 10/10/2011
Great job on the story, I liked it alot, keep up the great work and keep on writing.
AsylumGates chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
deep as hell .! please continue :)
Monika chapter 4 . 6/15/2011
WAAAHHHH? nuuuu make an epilogue! pleeeaaasee! i need moarrr!

But even if i'm feeling displeased haha xD awesome chapter! :)

This is one of my favorite fics
Who am I. I'm the Void chapter 4 . 6/15/2011
Whoa... this was... deep
Monika chapter 3 . 6/8/2011
Stockholm syndrome? wow that really make sense :0

Awesome chapter :D
Who am I. I'm the Void chapter 3 . 6/3/2011
O.O shell...

Now I'm confused... again. '

Hey! Not my fault your so tricky in your writing.

Ok, so... Raph is letting Leo to rape him just because he's protecting Mikey?

Leo and Raph never were a couple like I thought they were in the begining of this?

Are Raph and Mikey gonna be together?

Are you gonna keep me in suspense? I HATE SUSPENSE

But love this story Keep it going!
Aroa S. Quadrale chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
Whoa, this got alot darker. I cant help but wonder whats goona happen next! Are they gonna regret leaving Mikey in the dark? So many questions, so many ways things could happen! More please! XD
xxSpade's Ace chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
Poor Raph, and poor Leo! D: That must've been hell for them both. Part of me really hopes Leo never finds out about what he did, and then the other part wants him to know.

What the shit happened to Leo when he was tortured to make him have similar to a split personality? Poor thing :(
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