Reviews for Beginnings |
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KlokPriestess chapter 14 . 8/27/2014 great story so far...would love to see more chapters...fantastic! |
DJ Clawson chapter 14 . 7/12/2012 I'm so glad you continued! I wasn't sure if this fic was over or not. Please let us know if it is or it isn't. |
Novexus Prime chapter 13 . 7/6/2012 I love this plot. It's so out of the ordinary and original. I look forward to seeing the girls learn the truth. I can honestly say I can't predict what's going to happen. That's rare. Update soon. |
Kingdom Come chapter 1 . 5/25/2012 *looks at clock* 12:36...WELP! Best get out the coffee, I've got 12 more chapters to go :,D Haha anyway! I like it so far :3 It seems like this story's got good bones plot-wise! If I had to nitpick though, Charles' manner of speaking isn't quite right. He has kind of a stutter (again, just nitpicking, because I don't know if the loss of the stutter is intentional or not :P) Aside from that, there are a lot of things I like about this story. The women's names I found quite humorous, and there was a line that Mercy said about people needing a license to breed which I had to laugh at (mostly because I have thought that being a TA on several occasions XD). Also, by the way, I hope you don't mind, but I'm adding this to the C2 I manage :P I figured you've got three pretty strong OCs so far, so I'd add it (if you don't want it in though, I will remove it promptly). Anyway! I can't wait to read on -KC |
DJ Clawson chapter 13 . 5/2/2012 Cliffhanger! Yay! ... I mean, cliffhanger, no! But it was a really good cliffhanger. Keep up the excellent work. |
DJ Clawson chapter 12 . 5/2/2012 I actually find the notion of Charles walking with a cane adorable. I don't know why. |
compa16 chapter 1 . 3/15/2012 Must read more |
DJ Clawson chapter 10 . 10/17/2011 Awesome! I'm so glad this series is back. It's the best. |
DJ Clawson chapter 7 . 5/31/2011 I really like this story. I was happy to see it updated. |
Enboumay chapter 7 . 5/30/2011 Hooray for another chapter! As always, your interpretation of Charles' character is amusing and flawless, in my opinion. I also like that you go over the triplets' feelings and attitudes. They function well as a unit, yet they certainly have their own personalities! I greatly enjoy your writing... and this chapter had a nice length to it :D Once again, I cannot wait until the next installment. Looking forward to more of your work! |
loser by choice chapter 6 . 5/18/2011 Aww, poor Charles. He's so cute when he's flustered! |
Vortianized chapter 6 . 5/10/2011 yay! Awkward polygamy cuteness! Oh, and I squealed at Monterey Bay Aquarium! Story: So a long time ago My family lived in California. One day when I was three we all went to the aquarium. We were at the pick up and pet area (where you pet muscles and starfish and stuff). Apparently I picked up a starfish and threw it like a frisbee. The starfish landed smacked against the wall. We got kicked out of the aquarium. lol |
DJ Clawson chapter 4 . 3/24/2011 The final line was totally hilarious. Loving this story. |
loser by choice chapter 3 . 3/21/2011 This is so cute. Usually I don't like more than two people together in a relationship. I think polygamy is wrong. But your writing makes it believable and fun. Can't wait to see how Charles pulls this off. Especially with Faith. I like her best. ~LBC |