Very well written story so far and I definitely like where this was going. Would love to you see this one continued at some point. :)

Hope you update soon!

The part of this show that drew me in from the beginning was the occasional glimpse of humanity shown in the seemingly amoral characters. I think you've captured Adelle in a moment of humanity perfectly. Awesome fist chapters; I hope you continue this someday!

This is absolutely wonderful, please, continue!

ohhh... fun... any more?...

Good story; sad to see it has been abandoned. I hope you come back to it someday.

Wonderful chapters. I just started watching the show but I love this fanfic. I would definitely read any updates.

Great story. Will be a feature on TGR's twitter recommendations.

You've tackled a very complicated relationship, so far fairly well. Hope you continue with this story & update soon.

Wow. Was looking for a well written Adelle/Echo fic and I'm hooked already. Great work. You've got the voice just right. I'd love to see this story develop.

quite interesting view of things. Please do update.

You write Adelle beautifully. Continue, please!

This is a wonderful start. I am very interested in how Echo's ever-evolving state will effect her relationship with Adelle, as well as her reaction when she becomes aware of that personality kicking around in her brain.

A delicious and intriguing story so far. I find your exploration of Adelle's personality to be remarkably true to what we see in the show, and her relationship with Echo/Anna melds well fits effortlessly with canon, so that it is hard to remember where one leaves off and the other begins.

You also have a gift for description, which I enjoy very much, and I look forward to reading more of this story :) Cinnamon.

It's difficult for me to think of what I want to say. I don't usually review WIPs because I feel it's too hard to have an opinion of an incomplete thing, like a restaurant critic reiewing just the appetiser, however, since it seems so important to you I'll attempt.

So far I really like the glimpses into Adelle's head. She's the most intriguing character intheshow and you find the lonely, human part of her. I love seeing her in a fake relationship and I'd love to see where she ends up.