This came together really really well I think. The posttraumatic stress was something I always thought we should be seeing in the series, but beyond Ethan there was just nothing.. and it seemed like more than a little bit of a co-op. You've fixed that missing sense of it for me here. And you did it exceptionally well. Plus, Becker with his quiet overprotective side, and even Lester's snarky version of the same thing both really felt real. Great job!

Loved this! Thank you!

I loved this! I thought that Abby and Connor just slipped back into real life a little bit too easily - this is much more realistic. Awesome job!

I very nicely written study of Connor and Abby. You captured the trauma of their experience and the shock of their return to the ARC very effectively. Interesting that Connor became the stabilizing force in their relationship. It shows how much he has matured. I also liked how you portrayed Becker's protectiveness. Both his and Matt's characterizations ring true.

Absolutely loved it. Perfectly done