OH balls I though she was in the turtle prime verse for a second there! oh my god (Xovercrazy starts bouncing up and down in place) please stick her in turtles forever that would be so funny gotta read sequal bye(run like the road runner in loony tunes over to door labeled #2: Down the Rabbit Hole opens door runs full tilt-buggy inside slams door shut you approach the door when you hear a crazy girl scream "the power, the fiction, Yes!" There's a pause then the crazy girl sticks her head out the door and orders you to remember the super turtles and include them in the turtles forever part if you do a turtles forever part, because no one does ANYTHING with them and it's upsetting. Bye!
What did I just type? I don't know welcome to the crazy stuff my friends put up with. good luck surviving!

raph wore his ninja mask under the metal helmet in the movie
(i dont know WHY he wore 2 masks but it clearly showed him wearing it and then putting his helmet over it)

This story was just amazing-I really like what you did with your oc!

thank you for an awesome, awesome story! haven't read such a good tmnt fic for a while. loved your OC characters and the pairings. now of course, I gotta read the sequel!

That was FREAKIN AMAZING! Ur an AMAZINGLY AWESOME WRITER!

aww cute

MY GOD! I REALLY LOVED THE BEGINNING OF THIS CHAPTER! SO MUCH SEXUAL TENSION! BUT IT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! At least they got it out of there systems...LOL!

AWWWWW! LOL RAPH AND HIS STUBBORN PRIDE. MAKES HIM THAT MUCH CUTER! "There, was that so hard?" "Yes." hahaha! THEY'RE TO CUTE! IM ENJOYING SEEING RAPH SO JEALOUS AND ROWDY! PLUS HE'S MY FAV!

I am in love with this story! I really love how you created Alice and I appreciate all the comic book references. I cannot wait to read the sequel! Well done! :)

AMAZZZZINGGGGG.
I love this story, and can't wait to read the sequel! 3

That was fucking yet,if I were her,I would have died of imbarassment right then and there.I love the Ninja are badass...and no you !

I flipperdippin love story is the writing it please?

Oooh, awesome start so far. I really like it and am intrigued to see what will happen next. Alice is an interesting character, and I really like her a lot. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

To Catch a Thief was AMAZING!

Oh Alice, Alice, Alice. I love her. I really, really do. She’s an absolutely amazing character. She’s just so tough and kickass! I wish I could create characters like her. Her background was sad but it didn’t take away from her. She was able to grow from it, become this amazing woman who took charge. I adored it.

As for her and Raphael, oh my lordie lord! Can I just say I’ve never seen something so intense? Their relationship, with its ups and downs, was perfect and so believable. I just loved the raw power it had.

You kept all your characters, even characters you didn’t create, in such perfect character that I’m jealous. The writing flowed, the action scenes were always great and I just loved it. The ending made me so sad and I am sooooo glad that the sequel has started or I would probably just explode. I’m about to go read that right now!

Gah! I can’t wait! One of the best stories I’ve read and it’ll be put on my favourites list !

Love love LOVE this story! I can't wait for the sequel! Donatello is my favorite turtle, but you're making me warm up to Raphael more. :D Keep up the fantastic work!