oMG this is so sweet!

I think I haven't thank you enough for all your fantastic stories. So, thank you, thank you!

coule !

like always , I like your stories. maybe you will be my favorite author :)
once again thanks you :)
see ya :)

ps : sorry about my grammar here I'm not good in english

So cute! loved this

I can't believe I read this cutesy fic and didn't comment on this! D:
Oranges are good for colds? Never knew that lol

So...umm when is part two coming?

What an adorable Lightis one-shot! Nice little gestures like that have always meant a lot in my eyes!

emm huh...funny and sweet...nice to read different side of them...soooo nice!

UBER CUTE! OMIGODDESS, I love you! lol.

Keep it up! Love Ya-

Saphira

I loved this. I couldn't fault it at all. Was perfect. It's a great crossover. I could see this having a sequel or continuation. But even if it wasn't continued its a great one shot anyways. Loved it. I'll probably check out the rest of your works now after reading this one. )

I truly must say that this is one of the best Lightning x Noctis one-shots (or story of that matter) I have ever read. You kept the two characters completely in their molds, always staying in character, and gave them a well-rounded spot of emotion. Your fine writing compliments the entirety with a beautiful accent, and the story itself is a fabulous one at that.

I absolutely loved every bit of this story, and I can honestly say I wish there was more. It would be fantastic if you continued this, as it is already clear to me that you totally could, and I would follow it with a warm heart. I loved this story, and I plan to pay a visit to the rest of your gallery of fabulously, well written works.

Fantastic Work!

Hahahaha Noctis can't peel an orange! xD

I love how charming and persuasive you made Noctis, and how caring and loving you made Lightning.

Their first interaction was great!

I'm hoping to read some more of this !