My intention was to read this all at once and review at the end but i just HAVE to scream her for a bit
AASNSJAKALALAAAAAA
This is a rollercoaster of emotions!
I *knew* mai would die again, so naru would go back once more and save gene too (thank god) but i wasn't expecting it to hurt me so muuuuuuch!
And they years they spent togetherrrrr i wasn't prepared for how soft they would be!
I'm freaking out here, this fic is amazinggggg

I’m so sad that there’s not more. This was one of the more well written works in gh fanfic and I loved every minute of it. Not only was this such a different approach to a continuation but this was so well written and enchanting. Please continue this, I really want to see more of this!

Wow, I’m at a loss of words, the amount of detail that goes into this story is something I love so much. It has taken me three years to literally finish reading up to now, I’ve gotten distracted with life and then well as a younger teen there was just some parts to this I didnt understand and was stuck on. But here I am now 17 and extremely thankful for your writing. I do hope that you continue writing this. Stay safe and healthy. I’ll be waiting and hoping for the next update :)

*indephirable shrieking)/

I finally made it back through this story. It was as good as I remembered before life smacked me off the road and I missed a few chapters. I love the changes you made in the story and will still be around ready to pick it back up when you continue. Thanks for taking the time to share the story with all of us.

This fucked up love triangle is not what I expected nor wanted. Naru and Mai have already been dating for years now too so I don't like that it's even a prompt.

As I moved through your story I found it drew me in, but that I was also anxious for your characters. After reading your last author's note, I'm not sure that I don't feel even more so for Mai and Naru especially lol.
Thank you for deciding to stick with this despite the flaws you might see from your standpoint in your growth as a writer.
Thank you for sharing with us

Good work. I enjoyed the chapter. Don't get down about it not reflecting canon. Due to the time travel and their memories and new experiences it could never truly reflect canon. I look forward for what is in store for our friends in the next chapter.

I'm late to the party, am I not?

Anyway, I'm glad you're back! I even checked the update date thrice to ensure I wasn't dreaming. That I didn't misread it. But you DID come back. Thank you!

Amazing chapter as always. Naru started to piece together the mystery bits by bits. I'm excited to see where you'll be taking us with this time travelling theory.

About how your feeling change, I guess it's a part of growing up, isn't it? You've grown as a person and as a writer. There are things you can see clearer now than before. It's fine if you need time to do your story; I understand if you feel that it needs to be perfect. After all, you invested much of your time and feeling in this.

Uh, what am I going to say? I swear I have the smoothest way with words.

Bottom line is, I'll wait. Even if it takes months or years, I'll wait for you to finish this story. Take all the time you need. I know you'll be back again; I trust your word for it.

Thank you for not giving up. I'll see you around :)

Lovissa

I'm thrilled you are still writing this and I think the changes are okay it goes with the story theme of everything is different this time. Not bad just different. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

I'm just so pleased to see this update you know. I think this story is brilliant and the fact that you're going to continue it means so much. Thank you and take care.

This prologue had so many feels... Ughh, it was just so good. These vibes of bittersweetness, reminiscence and quiet understanding between Mai and Naru was palpable and I couldn't help but soak in those feelings. It felt so real... Haha, I feel now like I actually have somebody that I have missed that much :D This could have been a one-shot as well and a darn good one at that. What an amazing start.

Please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
MAIxNARU forever!

The curse of an uncooperative chapter - the enemy of many an author XD Glad that your muses came back though, and hope they'll be kinder to you in the future!
Love love love Madoka, and that she just /got/ everything straight off the bat. Can't wait to see what else she figures out!

This entire piece is positively brilliant. Thank you for this fantastic, imaginative, and utter jarring work of fiction!