Wish you'd update.

And the another chapters?...uuuu this is good
More,please

Wow is all I can say! This is a very great Yamacha vegeta story and I don't even like Yamacha buuutttt he's working his way on my list of fab characters anyway update this story because it is very good and you stopped at the most awesome part! This is when I say what the hell is wrong with you stopping so abruptly man I love your story ! ( some Yamacha vegeta stories suck but yours is number one and I like the idea of uke vegeta it's cute :) any how update your writing style is very unique and I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

Lol. Sometimes there comes a day, right out of the blue, when u wonder, how would rough but sex between these smexy virile warriors be like? And then drool... I really enjoyed the idea of yamcha, of all people, with vegeta, just the curiousity alone of how you would set that up, had me clicking on the story link. Unfortunatelly, for their moment to take place I had to digest a lot of plot crack. And I'm still reeling. U took the ooc too deep, and as zarbon (tfs) said, I can only swallow so much.

Please tell me your not going to stop right before the best part! Oh An I love the part where Piccolo and gohan run off to gether im a big fan of that pairing! Your a really good rider dispite the fact that there are not quotes around when the charaters are speaking(qite annoying actually) your skill makes up for it enogh that I can't not read it. Cant wait fot the next chapter I like how this is forming into a darker more adult version of my favorite childhood cartoon. Again great job so far!

I would have never guessed that I would like this story; but I do! Very cute and introspective. I hope you update.

Ah you're writing DBZ again! *dies*

wow this has great promise I think :)