awesome story. :)

You...are fabulous. I cannot even begin to explain. EMILY NEEDS TO COME BACK AND SHE AND HOTCH NEED TO MAKE BABIES ALREADY.

Your fic is like, Xanax to a Neurotic patient. It does WONDERS.

Oh God...

Now I'm crying all over again...

That was just perfection - Oh I adored every second of it. I love the part where she told him she was still Emily - I picked up that reference in 'Coming Home' and I knew that when I read it in this one it would be an adorable moment...

Everything about this was just fantastic, what a way to counteract the sadness at the end of the episode...

Oh and by the way you should definitely write something else. I'll be looking for it!

Love Michelle x

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That was simply gorgeous.

Thank you and I am off to read the sequel.

I do hope Paget will return seeing that CBS has offered her a full season again but I would understand if she wouldn't, how ever much that sucks. Amazing actress.

it! Tasteful and yet insanely hot and sexy! Keep up the good work!

This was amazing! Great job...so sad though. :/

Beautifully sensual.

Wow! Brilliant, brilliant job! Bravo!

I am blown away by how well written this piece is. The depth of emotion to it was amazing and I am looking forward to reading the following piece.

I'm with you on this one; if I owned CM Emily would so NOT be gone from the show.

I've read this one when you posted, I just was in a hurry that I didn't have time to review :)

This was awesome, reeeally awesome! and helped to make it more bearable to think about "Lauren". Thank you for writing it :D

Fantastic story, passionate and sensitive. I would love for this to happen in the show of course.

Have you considered a follow up? Maybe setting in 5years time or, maybe when they finally find Doyle. So many options here.

Anyway, really great, well done

I love this. It irks me that Hotch didn't get a goodbye scene from Emily like the rest of the team did. But I like to think that the two of them had an encounter similar to this that is better than the poorly hidden farewells that the team got. I cry when I read post-Lauen fics. I really like the emotion this has. I wish Paget had been allowed to stay the rest of the season. The show just isn't going to be the same anymore.

Plan to have a deeper review when I have more time, but suffice it to say, this is how Lauren ends in my head :) Great stuff!

This was so perfectly wonderful but at the same time it had a bittersweet sadness to it u did great n I can only hope u can give us a peaceful mind n write a sequel of her actually returning to him thank u for this I was sad how quickly they ended the ep n that no one especially Aaron didn't get to say a proper goodbye n I think this was a perfect n appropriate goodbye

Wow. That was so powerful, and moving. I wish that would have happened. Great job. Just...wow