Nice...

Wow.

Powerful imagery.

awww! i loved this. it was def. unique in how you wrote it as a dream, with the possibility of something happening in the future. it was uber cute, and i think you wrote the fic so well in character! adorable.

I remember your name from Stargate and The Sentinel, so as I'm new to the fandom it was nice to see a name I recognised! This was lovely :) Hot, sweet, the characters rang true. Loved it. I'm looking forward to reading the seduction story that has to follow lol

Oh dear! I've just read your story and it's... amazing! I'm agree with other reviewers, it's so hot but romantic also... Poor Steve, what a suffering it may be having such thoughts, but been unable to share them... Keep writing stories like this, in spite of English not being my first language, I enjoyed a lot, really!

wow, that was REALLY good! And hot ;) Please tell me you're going to write a sequel for this? :D we want more!

X

Wow that was some erotic dream. Steve really has it bad. This worked well.

Wow. This is wow...I can't even...wow. It's so hot, but also really romantic. I hope that one day you're inclined to write like this from Danny's POV too.

I love how you have the character so well thought through! Please keep going!

Nikki