I have a very very very unhealthy obsession with the Doyle saga...in fact I'm watching Lauren right now. This is simply amazing. You have no idea how much I love your writing, and this in fact made my day! :D

It's sucked he died, i kinda like doyle. I love doyle/emily!

Okay, so I know I've read this before but I clearly didn't review and I have absolutely no idea why I didn't. I love the Emily/Lauren x Ian pairing especially where she's so in love but doesn't want to admit it because you could totally see that in their interactions in the show. Seriously, this story was absolutely brilliant!

"Look at me, she remembered him saying after he had presented the ring to her. I am Valhalla. I have no idea what kind of life we're going to have, but…I just want you in mine."

I can't even do this anymore. This is emotionally draining me. On the one hand I so desperately wanted him to change so they could be together and he could be a good man and she would be happy but on the other I wanted her to run for her life and never look back!

They could have made it; I think 'Lauren' did love him but 'Emily' was more powerful, even though she became Lauren which didn't allow her to run away with Ian. Sometimes good people get caught up in bad situations but Emily didn't allow herself to be one of those people which was brave.

I think this was an incredible story line they added to the show. Without this I think Emily's character would be great but averagely great; this brings a whole new dimension to who she is as a person. The whole being-undercover-and-in-love-with-a-terrorist plot was amazing and I think you've written it so brilliantly!

You're such a natural writer Nooshin and my favourite! :3

OF COURSE, PHEONIX TEARS HAVE HEALING POWER!

I couldn't help myself there :')

It was really interesting how you defined her tattoos, I for one can't picture Paget with tattoos, I wonder if she has any.. However I think all of those are unique and suited to her- the reason people should get tattoos! Also what I love about FF is that people can bring the show into more depth rather than some brief points they pick up on which is another reason I love this, because of the way you're taking apart things from the show and developing it into something amazing!

This is so tense, it would be horrible to be waiting for your death! Ah I love this so far!

I didn't realize you had another one! Ha, I'm reading this all in an Irish accent for the hell of it :')

" "Don't be. I'll just let you make it up to me later today," he added huskily, his Irish accent adding to the quality of seduction." Whenever he speaks, I feel quite scared? for lack of better word, because although he acts all lovely and charming, you can't help but remember he is a scary man.

It is quite scary to think how easily she let herself become Lauren. It's hard enough pretending to be someone you're not in everyday life- not laughing at inappropriate times, not being too weird or too different and things like that but to have a whole new identity and a whole new fake life is incredible!

This is perfect because you show both Ian as a father/lover and Ian as what he really is- a bastard! I'm already loving this story!

You put SO much emotion into this, I'm sobbing about it all over again. EXTREMELY well done!

I knew I read this story a while ago and now I found it again. Yay! Great work!

I... You... They... I just... Oh wow. I'm speechless. At first I was getting all teary eyed over the cute, sweet stuff and

how Emily wanted to be Lauren. But then I was getting all choked up because of the perfect descriptions of the end scene in "Lauren". Reading it made it almost harder than watching it. I honestly flinched and paused for a few minutes here and there because it was so well done that I could see it as I was reading it.

I'm mad at you. I saw "romance" and got all giddy. Where's my romance? I'm just messing with you. I really, really enjoyed reading this and I think you didn't an amazing job on it. Bravo!

I think my review would be best if I used a choice line from a song -

Why do you build me up, build me up, buttercup baby, just to let me down, let me down!

Ugh! You make me totally forget that I'm reading a story based off of "Lauren" and then throw it at me when I least expect it! I'm cutting this short to see how you end it! Lovely chapter!

Oh wow. Now, don't tell anyone, but I've always secretly liked the idea of Emily being happy with Ian... Sooooo... This is kind of hurting my poor little heart right now. I hope maybe you'll have a different ending to this than what the show did... If not, I'm sure it'll still be brilliant. I'm totally in love with your writing. It truly is very, very good. On to the next chapter!

Oh! And I love the cute little thing between Emily and Declan. And her inner monologue. :)

awesome story! i love it!

~Vampiremuggle

vampiremuggle at gmail dot com

Oh. my. GOD.

You have just made my day with this. I swear. Made. My. Freaking. Day.

And I SO agree about Paget Brewster. CBS is full of idiots, and that's as far as I'll go- I'm far too nice ;)

But I loved 'Lauren' so much, I bought it on iTunes. And this has just made it so much better. You have real talent here.

Excellent job!

Beautifully done. This almost gave me the courage to rewatch Lauren. Its just sitting on my laptop waiting...waiting...waiting. Maybe soon.