I think you pictured the Chosens very well here. I don't understand people who dislike Colette just because she's a nice girl... She's much more than that, and even if most people don't realize it, she wears a mask just like Zelos, as you said, to hide her pain.

I think I like the siblings relationship between them, too.

Anyway, good job!

good story! it was touching :)

I'm honestly always fascinated by Zelos and Colette's bond. It's a bittersweet relationship they have that just can't be broken. You got it just right in this~

You know, out of all the characters in the game, I think Zelos and Colette can really relate to each other most of all, which gives them a very strong friendship. :) And you showed that so beautifully. I really loved this. Thanks so much for posting it!

Yay, for a second when I saw this I thought it was a pairing, I was like hmmmm really? But I see what you did here, it's nice. I think they have an interesting relationship, Zelos definitely admires her ability to cope with being Chosen better than him.

But, as I've pointed out to people before, she did have a lot of friends and support. The way being Chosen worked in Tethe'alla, Zelos wasn't treated like a person or really respected for being Chosen, people didn't appreciate or value him. Colette was treated very nicely by the people of Iselia.

Anyway, good job! :)

Much love,

-FP