That was cute, especially the ending when Jack kissed Ralph. I liked how you kept the same dialogue style that Eric and Sam do when they talk. I cringed at the part where you described the other boys' deaths, though. Talk about awful ways to die. Anyway, nice job.

AHHH! Poor Eric! Don't rape the child, Roger! D:

But yay, more Jack x Ralph!

Ralph and Jack's kiss was SEXY

Aww that is actually very sad DX fluffy and sad at the same time...Johnny was purposely killed and Maurice commited suicide after Robert accidentally died? That's just so...dark and angsty TT

Awww kawaiiiiiiiii!

Aww the end line Ralph said was so cute x3

I loved this story. I'm really sad there isn't more of it.

Ahhh that was sooo cute! Omg, please write a sequel, I know you said this was a oneshot but I loved this. Criticism: it was too awesome! ) Well, I'm not very good at critcism anyway, haha. I really liked how you killed off all of the backround characters, because honestly they really annoy me at times. Naturally, I loved the kiss at the end. JackXRalph is my favorite pairing!

That was an amazing story. Roger kind of ffreaked me out, but Jacks thoughts were so sad. And Ralph is SOO adorable.

Loved it! It was soooo cute when Ralph and Jack kissed! and the bit with Roger and Eric made me laugh xD