Ohhh my. *falls over laughing*

AWESOME! Olivier/Roy is one of the weird pairings I find very funny, but there doesn't seem to be any fanfics or fan art for them. That was absolutely hilarious! XD

All I can say is that this was really weird. But interesting and well written. The only suggestion I have is that in your sentence, "Hearing the news that Mustang got promoted made her blood boiled." You should've said either "Hearing the news that Mustang got promoted made her blood boil." or; "Hearing the news that Mustang got promoted, her blood boiled."

Otherwise it's a runnon. Thank you! I'm an English teacher, so don't take it out on me. Thank you again!

That was just so priceless. Serves Roy right and she just might kill him yet.