Reviews for Green and White
Lorikemu chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Beautiful story! Loved it!

Just the usual spelling-grammar issues. For example, at the start of a sentence, even though it starts with the ellipsis, the first word still has to start with a capital letter.

Other than that, stunning! I felt like I was there! :)
SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Wow... :)
Erika-moon chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
That part was so sweet like a cliche for a doujin
oshawottforever chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Cute and fluffy. Just how I like it. I also love the way you expressed touko's character. One of my favorite ferriswheelshipping fanfics.
ivystar chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
it's touching
a chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Short and sweet...
agentstaticfab.killjoy chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
words... 2 lazy to type now...
Ding chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Very cute, but I think N is alittle out of character in this story, because personally I don't think N would just go to white and kiss her without really getting to know her frist.
DigimonLoveForever chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
3 Soooo CUTEEE
Katneese Yuno chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Love this couple...
I wish to see this on anime,not as a fan work
Great story!
The 2D Ninja chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Other than the fact that you switched from third person to first person in the first sentence (unless that was on purpose), the story was really good! I'm definitely adding it to my favorites! :)
alexadria345 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
nice! i love the emotion on white's part
Yami Ceylan chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
that story waas cute!
doneandmoredone chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Good fic. Ah, nice complicated relationship. I do think Touko's forgiveness would mean a lot to N. :) The dialog was a bit awkward at times, though, but I'm just nitpicky.
AmethystMoon420 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
WOW! That was SO beautifully sweet! I liked your choice of words to create a vivid scene! Very well done! _
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