| Reviews for Green and White |
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Lorikemu chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 Beautiful story! Loved it! Just the usual spelling-grammar issues. For example, at the start of a sentence, even though it starts with the ellipsis, the first word still has to start with a capital letter. Other than that, stunning! I felt like I was there! :) |
SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 8/4/2014 Wow... :) |
Erika-moon chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 That part was so sweet like a cliche for a doujin |
oshawottforever chapter 1 . 2/3/2013 Cute and fluffy. Just how I like it. I also love the way you expressed touko's character. One of my favorite ferriswheelshipping fanfics. |
ivystar chapter 1 . 1/10/2013 it's touching |
a chapter 1 . 1/7/2013 Short and sweet... |
agentstaticfab.killjoy chapter 1 . 9/24/2012 words... 2 lazy to type now... |
Ding chapter 1 . 9/16/2012 Very cute, but I think N is alittle out of character in this story, because personally I don't think N would just go to white and kiss her without really getting to know her frist. |
DigimonLoveForever chapter 1 . 8/29/2012 3 Soooo CUTEEE |
Katneese Yuno chapter 1 . 8/5/2012 Love this couple... I wish to see this on anime,not as a fan work Great story! |
The 2D Ninja chapter 1 . 7/28/2012 Other than the fact that you switched from third person to first person in the first sentence (unless that was on purpose), the story was really good! I'm definitely adding it to my favorites! :) |
alexadria345 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012 nice! i love the emotion on white's part |
Yami Ceylan chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 that story waas cute! |
doneandmoredone chapter 1 . 8/25/2011 Good fic. Ah, nice complicated relationship. I do think Touko's forgiveness would mean a lot to N. :) The dialog was a bit awkward at times, though, but I'm just nitpicky. |
AmethystMoon420 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011 WOW! That was SO beautifully sweet! I liked your choice of words to create a vivid scene! Very well done! _ |