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FING CLIFFHANGER...YOU NEED TO UPDATE

this is a good story, I hope you continue it soon

well, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing, I must say I like the premise of the story and the fact that you started in the present, and then in the next chapters worked your way up to the present! I must also say I like the play on Kasumi's name, making her Ranma's refuge! LOL, I am hoping that this story isn't dead, but merely on hold until your muse gets the next chapters into your hands so you can get them out to the readers! I like that you had Ranma hand out the beat downs that were deserved to those that needed them, but I am just curious as to how the father's are going to react when they get home and find out what has happened? oh well, I will wait till you update this story, or if it's dead...I will mope a bit but then I will move on! again, here's hoping that this finds you well!

Interesting way to tell a story. Its very original. Regular updates of the story are necessary to keep a loyal fan base.

Did they plan for a month or three months? It keeps switching back and forth between the two, so some confirmation would be nice.

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Well, there wasn't much happening in this chapter, but the describing was good. I think it fit the characters.

I really want to know how you're gonna continue the story. Because you really gave it a big twist with Ranma's way of "venting(hahaha).

Just keep on typing!

"Through out her life, [Akane] had never felt pain." Oh, really? So it was not painful for Akane to twist her ankle, twice? It was not painful for Akane to fracture her wrist? Akane never felt pain during the Couple Cleaver? It didn't cause her any pain when Shampoo threw her to the ground with her strength tester machine? It didn't hurt when she was caught in Kodachi's floor trap and knocked unconscious? And of course, she didn't feel any pain at all when she was reduced to a dehydrated doll by touching the Kinjakan. (Despite her scream of agony)

Even if you mean Akane had never felt pain before Ranma arrived in her life, you contradict that by pointing out the scrapes and injuries Dr. Tofu treated when she was a little girl. And, of course, you assume she was never touched even once in all of her battles with Kuno and the Hentai Horde. I also notice how deftly you managed to blame Akane's fear of men on her mother's involvement with rape victims. Not that there was anything in her OWN lifetime of experiences that could be considered sexual assault...

Granted, I realize that this is Akane bashing (and Ryoga, Shampoo, Ukyo and Mousse bashing) but give me a break. I honestly haven't seen fit to comment so far, but that was WAY over the top.

...Ranma broke can Kasumi pls fix him

and where did Kuno (tatewaki SP?) go?

mousse ouch... then again i recall tatewaki squeezing

Ranma no like...

nice chap, ok that sounds off (as ranma was raging) ,well detailed chap

await more

A good chapter you described and shaped quite well. The character backgrounds were all very fitting, and I must admit hat was the most reasonable explanation for the Amazon's system I've ever seen.

I only really have one comment here, and it's something I'm hoping to use in a future fic of my own. Ranma here says he can't choose one girl without hurting the honor of the others. While that may be true, I think he should start asking what reasons BESIDES honor does he have to pick any girl. Does he really want to marry a girl simply because someone (i.e. Genma, Cologne, Nodoka, etc.) made him feel he OWES her? Is that what he wants to tell his kids? That he married their mother because he was obligated? I know that honor is very important to Ranma, and while that's a good thing the undeniable fact of the matter is that this whole time he's been letting honor be the primary if not only deciding factor here in his choosing and he'll never get an answer that way. He needs to pretend for just one moment that he has no obligations, no commitments, no duties to ANY of them and ask himself if that were the case who would he choose. He might be surprised to see what answers he gets then.

Review of Chapter 1:

Pretty good you have my intrest, I just have one complaint Ranma would never attack Gosunkugi with all his power as that would be overkill. A punch from Ranma at normal strength would put him in ICU while a punch from Ranma under the Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion would just hurt him

Review of Chapter 4:

When Ranma is beating on Ryoga and Ryoga says "You honourless bastard, how dare you train secretly to become better than me?" Ranma after calling him Pork breath should have said "I killed a god so anyone with a brain should be able to tell I have been holding back"

And wow, did we get inside some messed up heads this chapter. When the near-sighted, colorblind male Amazon who got smashed through a wall is the sanest one (Ranma's on the edge there), you know that they've got problems. Until next time.

oh my! he's gonna kill her! O.O if not a someone stops Ranma! xD thx for the update I loved this chapter! Just keep on typing

wooo, keep up the good work, great story, I am looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Angry Ranma is a fearsome sight, especially when directed at you. The Shampoo/Ryouga twist is interesting, and could solve at least some problems for Ranma. Until next time.