I'm crying so hard rn. TT-TT This just makes Sam's death even sadder. I love it though. This is really good.

Oh, look, I've been impaled.

You've killed me. My heart has died and my soul is a door nail. I'm crying SO MUCH! Fantastic job capturing Dean's pain in this moment. And I thought the way you had Sam look confused as to why 'the nightmare wasn't over' since Dean was there was tragic and perfect. Great work! :D

This is
The best
Cold Oak fic
you win
all the prizes holy
sh
that was absolutely flawlessly perfectly brilliant wow
thanks so much for sharing your brilliance. This is everything that it should have been and more.

It's amazing how you captured the scenes and put it into words. I could see the images clearly in my head and still it felt like more than that.. like i could see right through it and that's with your amazing writing there. You took an emotional scene and made it perfect with words.. i think my heart stopped when i started reading and didnt start until i was done. I'm awed ! Wonderful !

Oh god. The most heartbreaking moment in all of supernatural history and you just had to go and MAKE ME RELIVE IT. Amazing. So well written. These are the boys I love! Where have they gone? Thank you

Yep. Totally had to be one of the most heartbreaking scenes ever done. I never ever cry watching TV but I cried like a toddler watching this episode. You captured it erfectly. You're a very gifted writer.

So sad and so absolutely what I think was going through Dean's head.

I always cried when I watched that scene. Good job.

:( this part was always so emotional just seeing Sam die but Deans thoughts? are to heartbreaking. i loved it great writing

You really know how to tug at a reader's heartstings, don't you? This was so sad, but perfect. I'm a Samgirl (though I love both boys), yet you're making me see things clearly and emotionally from Dean's perspective. Really impressive; awesome job! :)

Okay, so, WOW, this is really great. I love the way you described the moment right before the knife went in, just total confusion, and I LOVED the end, because I felt like you totally nailed what Dean must have been experiencing at that moment. Overall, -really- well done! :))

*Just pure, childlike, innocent confusion that didn't understand why the nightmare wasn't over yet.*

That is exactly the look, isn't it? You captured it perfectly. This scene was so hard to watch, hard to read too, but you have the balance of emotion down really well.

Very well done.

The only thing that had ever mattered more to him than his own life, and it had just been stripped off like his own skin/~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This story bleeds power and emotion and poetry!

Wow!

Most impressive.

Thank you,

Karen