this piece was damn hoto

Aww that was so sext and sweet i dont know how to feel right now...all you need to know is that you're a great writer! dont stop writing

This is exactly what I needed right now been reading too many serious fanfics lately. Your descriptions are amazing, beautifully poetic at the right times. Loved it.

god damn...hot and cute at the same time!

awesome story! :)

That was… wonderful!

Whenever I read this I get Modest Mouse in my head... :) Awesome story. I love the way you described Draco, that's just how I think of him! Keep writing, yes?

Great smut scene! Loved it.

Awesomez, Im just saying.

Thanks for writing a really decent yaoi. There so ard to find these days.:)

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I feel for you; I'm on Sprink Break and dying to bring out the cargo shorts, but nooooo. Stupid, persnickety Colorado weather... Ohio's probably worse, though. Gah. -_-

I thoroughly enjoyed the purple writing in this piece; I'd love to see what you could do with your writing outside of Fanfiction. I'm assuming you're in college, so I was just wondering if your major was Creative Writing, or something up that alley.

-Crick

Qoftheday: "Preventitive war is like committing suicide for fear of death." -Otto von Bismarck.

would say more, but since i'm still almost asleep i'll only say this - YUMMY . luved it, you're awesome! luve You, keep up this amazingness .

how was that

hmm let me think fuckin awesome.

loved it

A bit out of character, but I really liked this, and since you said you were playing with dialect I'll tell you that your word choice made this story much more interesting to read. Good job :)

The only critique I have is that at some points I couldn't really tell who was doing what to who. But good story, loved it :)