Hahahah poor brock

Haha that was awesome! Lesson learned I guess. lol

Really funny

Yeah, true.

This is the third time I've read this and it STILL cracks me up. It's just pure genius! I can totally see this happening! Everyone was so in character. Hilarious, I love it :)

haha I can so see Brock doing this :D

Why haven't I read this yet I'm glad that blonde girl took the fact that Ash was taken so well, and Brock, oh Brock was that really worthing invoking The Wrath of Misty? anyway good story

haha the end had be laughing so hard I could'nt even read it without chuckling!

lol, Ash really didn't think that through, now did he?

I laughed REALLY hard reading this. If only I hadn't set Brock's children as older in mine, I would have used this. Wait... I've got it! Flint ca use Brock's kids like that. XD

Well written girl. Well done.

~Yondy

Hmmm My brother used me when i was six to do that

Ha! Gold! Absolute, Brock-filled gold! No joke, I feel like the writers of Pokemon (at least the old writers before cartoon network got ahold of the franchise) woud have Brock use Ash and Misty's kids as girl magnets. This has got to be one of my favorites of your fics! great job! )

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Brock is my fav character! Hilarious story!

I've read this story before and I have always meant to review it. Anyways, I loved this story and I thought it was beyond adorable. I would have to say my favorite part was when Brock talked to Aiden about how he looked like his dad. (Brock's take on that was really funny). I really like your stories and they always make me laugh.